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The Creaking Clock of Millhaven: The Job That Smelled of Rust And Oatcakes

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Chapter 1 of 20

The stagecoach shuddered to a halt, and Mira Thornwick's first breath of Millhaven tasted of brine and something older, something metallic that clung to the back of her throat.

She pulled her traveling coat tighter and stepped down onto cobblestones slick with condensation. The fog arrived not as a gradual thing but as a curtain dropping, swallowing the coach behind her within seconds. Somewhere above, a clock struck an unfamiliar chord, three notes layered where two should have been, and Mira counted them twice to be certain.

Twelve. Twelve strikes for what should have been four o'clock.

The driver had already vanished. Not departed, vanished, as though the fog had taken him whole between the loading step and the mounting block. The horses stamped, their breath forming small white ghosts that dissolved before they reached the height of her knee.

"Right, then," Mira muttered, and unrolled the map.

The parchment crinkled beneath her fingers, warm from being pressed against her thigh for the last three hours of switchback roads. She had purchased it from a vendor in Briarport, a severe woman with spectacles perched on the tip of her nose, who had sworn the cartography was accurate to within the width of a thumb. The ink was fresh. The paper still carried the faint sweetness of linseed oil.

Mira had been navigating since she could read. She knew how to fold a map, how to orient it, how to hold it level so the compass rose sat true. She knew the difference between a bridle path and a footpath, and she could estimate walking time across four types of terrain without consulting her pocket watch.

The streets of Millhaven, however, had apparently decided to rearrange themselves overnight.

She turned the map sideways. She turned it upside down. She held it at arm's length and squinted, then held it close and squinted harder. The street names slid beneath her gaze like fish beneath ice. Anchor Lane had migrated from the harbor district to somewhere near what the map's legend insisted was the municipal granary. Saltwhistle Way now bisected the apothecary quarter. A new alley, unlabeled, had appeared between the clock tower and something called the Quarterly Fog Census Office, an institution Mira had not known existed and was not entirely convinced should.

The streets of Millhaven were not, in the end, rearranged. They were simply confused. Confused with intention, perhaps. Confused with malice, more likely. They twisted in directions that no rational town planner would have sanctioned, doubling back on themselves, opening onto unexpected courtyards paved with sea-glass, terminating abruptly at the edges of cliffs or at the doors of buildings that looked as though they had been designed by someone who had heard the word "architecture" spoken aloud but had never seen a building.

Mira gave up on the map. She folded it along its original creases, stuffed it into her coat pocket, and asked a man outside a tobacco shop which way the town hall lay.

The man, who had a face like a dried apricot and a pipe clenched between his teeth, pointed. "Straight. Past the fishmonger. Turn left at the clock that runs backward. You cannot miss it."

"The clock that runs backward?"

"Aye. Runs backward since 1847. Allegedly. Nobody knows why." He sucked on his pipe, considered the matter, and added, "Some say it marks the time of something. Something that has not happened yet. Or has happened and is happening again. The opinions vary."

"Right," Mira said, and walked.

She passed a shop selling buttons, another selling nothing at all, a third selling exactly one of each thing imaginable. She passed a fishmonger whose display included not only fish but also a small, opinionated lobster in a bowl, who tracked her progress with one black eye and clicked its claws in a manner that might have been greeting or warning.

Then she saw the clock.

It sat above the entrance to a chandler's shop, fixed to the brickwork by iron brackets that had gone orange with rust. The clock face was white, the numerals Roman, the hands black. Mira squinted. The hour hand was retreating past the nine, creeping toward the eight, while the minute hand spun in lazy reverse circles that took it back through the quarter hour, the half hour, and onward, into a future that was technically a past.

It was, Mira reflected, the least of Millhaven's oddities.

She turned left.

The town hall occupied a square at the heart of the town, a building of considerable age and modest dignity. It had been built, she guessed, sometime in the late 1500s, possibly the early 1500s, or possibly never. The pamphlet she had read in the Briarport coach station had been firm on the uncertainty. The building was made of grey stone, three stories tall, with windows that held small panes of glass that had gone slightly rippled with age, and a bell tower that did not, at present, contain a bell.

A clerk sat at a desk just inside the door, sorting papers into piles of varying height. He glanced up at Mira, then down at his papers, then up again.

"Can I help you?"

"I'm here to see the councilor. About a position."

"Which position?"

"The Keeper of the Underclock," Mira said, and watched the clerk's face perform a small but interesting journey. He blinked. He set down his pen. He looked at her as if she had just announced that she intended to swallow the building's foundation stone.

"Ah," he said. "You mean Mister Pfenning."

"If Mister Pfenning is the councilor in question."

"Mister Pfenning is the councilor in question. Though he is also Mister Pfenning in several other capacities, which he will explain to you at considerable length, if you give him the chance. Third floor. The door with the brass snail on it. You cannot miss it. Though he would prefer that you did."

"I'm sorry?"

"He is a private man," the clerk said, and returned to his papers.

Mira climbed.

The stairs were wooden, narrow, and worn into shallow bowls by the passage of centuries of feet. They creaked in a manner that was almost musical, ascending through a scale that grew flatter with each floor. The walls were hung with portraits of previous mayors, previous councilors, previous clerks who had perhaps looked exactly like the present one and had perhaps been his father, or grandfather, or great-grandfather, in a line of descent that the town of Millhaven seemed to specialize in.

At the third floor there was a single door. It was painted dark green, the paint cracked in long curls that suggested it had not been refinished since the previous century. Mounted at eye level was a brass escutcheon shaped, precisely, like a snail. The snail's antennae curled upward. Its shell spiraled inward. Its expression, insofar as a brass mollusk could be said to possess one, suggested patience. Or possibly indigestion.

Mira knocked.

"Enter," said a voice from within, in a tone that had been expecting her, and had been expecting her for some time, and had prepared several remarks to make about her arrival.

The room beyond the door was, in its way, a clock. Not literally. Though it contained clocks. Clocks of every description, on every surface, in every corner. Mantel clocks, grandfather clocks, carriage clocks, pocket watches laid open on cushions, a ship's clock mounted on the wall, a cuckoo clock that was, mercifully, silent. They ticked and tocked and clicked and chimed in a dozen different rhythms, none of which agreed with any of the others. The air smelled of brass polish, old wood, machine oil, and something faintly herbal, like the inside of a tea caddy.

Aldric Pfenning sat at a desk made of walnut so dark it appeared almost black, positioned beneath a window that opened onto the reverse face of the great tower. Light fell across him in slats, each one the width of an hour. He did not stand when she entered. He did not smile. He lifted his gaze from the pocket watch he had been examining through a brass loupe, lowered the loupe, and regarded her over the rims of spectacles whose lenses appeared to have been ground from the bottoms of old bottles, thick and faintly amber.

"Sit," he said, and indicated a chair that was already pulled out, as though he had arranged the furniture the night before in careful anticipation of her arrival.

Mira sat. The chair smelled of cat hair and furniture wax.

Aldric Pfenning did not speak for a long moment. He seemed to be waiting for something to settle in the air, or perhaps for the dozen clocks in the room to finish a particularly contentious bar of whatever they had been arguing about. Then he reached into a drawer, produced a sheet of paper, and slid it across the desk toward her.

"You have read the contract, I assume."

"I have."

"And you have questions."

"A few."

"Then ask them quickly, please. I have an escapement to adjust at half past."

Mira studied his face. It was a face that discouraged questions by the very composition of its features. The brow was heavy, the mouth a thin downturn, the eyes the color of weak tea and twice as cautious. But there was something at the corners of his mouth, a slight indentation, that suggested he was not unkind, merely economical.

"The tower clock," she said. "What, precisely, is wrong with it?"

"Everything." He folded his hands. "And nothing that any other horologist in three counties has been able to identify. It gains. It loses. Sometimes it gains and loses in the same afternoon. It strikes the hours in the wrong order. It refuses to strike at all on Sundays, as though it has developed religious objections. And three weeks ago, it stopped entirely for eleven minutes, at which point it rang thirteen."

"Thirteen."

"Thirteen." He opened his hands, palms upward, the gesture of a man surrendering to a higher authority. "I have rebuilt the escapement. I have re-pinned the train. I have replaced the suspension spring with one of my own design. Nothing I do persuades it. It is, I have come to believe, unhappy."

"Unhappy," Mira repeated.

"I am choosing the word deliberately. A machine does not become unhappy. But this machine has begun, in certain lights, to do things that machines do not do."

He watched her. She watched him back.

"I will be honest with you, Miss Thornwick, because I have no time for anything else. The council wants the clock silenced for a week while they investigate the foundation for cracks. You will be paid to be present during that silencing, to certify that no damage is done to the mechanism, and to report any irregularities. That is the contract. The irregularity, I suspect, is what they actually want you here for."

"And you?"

His mouth twitched. The indentation deepened. "I want it to stop being thirteen o'clock in the middle of the afternoon. That is my irregularity."

She read the contract again. The terms were plain. The pay was moderate. The duration was a single week, possibly two. There was a clause permitting her to inspect any clock in the custody of the town, and another prohibiting her from speaking to the press. There was a clause, oddly, about not entering the clock chamber after dark.

"After dark," she said.

"Yes."

"Why?"

"Because it is dark. The staircase has two hundred and three steps. The rail is unreliable. I do not wish to be responsible for the broken bones of a colleague."

The word colleague settled in the room like an additional clock had been unwound.

"Very well," Mira said. "I accept."

Aldric Pfenning nodded once, as though he had expected this answer at this exact moment and had prepared a small ceremony for its arrival. He produced a key from his waistcoat pocket and placed it on the desk. It was small, brass, and of a peculiar design, its bow shaped like a crescent moon.

"The lodgings," he said. "Above the bakery on Wenlock Street. There is a workshop and a bedroom. I had the floorboards relaid last spring. The kettle works, the stove works, the water is drawn from a pump in the alley. Your neighbors are a chandler and a young girl named Daphne, daughter of the innkeeper, who will, I warn you, attempt to be your friend."

"You know everyone in this town."

"I know when people are attempting to be friendly, Miss Thornwick. It is one of the few reliable talents of old age." He gathered the contract back into his drawer. "You will begin on Monday. Until then, settle in. Eat something. Daphne will see to that."

He returned to his pocket watch and his brass loupe. The conversation, Mira understood, was over.

She stood, took the key, and left the room. Behind her, one of the clocks began to chime. She counted eleven strokes and then stopped, as if it had caught itself.

The lodgings above the bakery were reached by an external staircase of iron and treads so narrow they suggested the building had originally been designed for small birds. The blue door at the top was painted in a shade that existed somewhere between lavender and the bruises Mira remembered from her schoolyard years. The crescent-moon key turned twice, and the door opened onto a room that was not large.

It was a workshop first. A long bench ran beneath the window, already furnished with a small vice, a set of pin gauges, and a magnifying glass on an articulated arm. The floor was bare pine, sanded pale. The walls had been whitewashed within the year, and in one corner stood a cast-iron stove no larger than a sewing machine, its chimney disappearing into the wall with the tidy confidence of a skilled plumber's work. Beyond the workshop, through a curtained doorway, lay a bedroom no larger than a closet, containing a narrow bed, a washstand, a chest of drawers, and nothing else.

Mira set her case down. She unrolled her canvas tool roll and laid the screwdrivers and tweezers and brooms in their places on the bench. She hung her apron on a hook. She set the kettle on the stove. She did not light the stove, because the room was not yet cold.

On the kitchen table, which was the workbench, there was a plate.

The plate was white, chipped at the rim, and on it lay four oatcakes arranged in a fan. Beside the plate was a folded piece of paper, torn from what appeared to be a school exercise book. Mira unfolded it.

The handwriting was round and exuberant, and she could read it even in the failing light from the window. The walls will talk by Tuesday. Ignore them. Then, below, in slightly smaller letters: There is honey in the jar by the stove. Also I saved you a cinnamon bun but I ate it. Sorry. Then, smaller still, and underlined twice: I will come by in the morning to explain everything. Then a single initial: D.

Mira turned the note over. On the back, in the same round hand, was a crude drawing of a clock with a face, and a speech bubble coming from the clock that read, in capitals: HELP.

She set the note down. She ate two of the oatcakes standing up, because sitting down would have required finding a chair and she had not yet located one. They were good oatcakes, dense with oats and a faint whisper of caraway. The honey was local. The jar by the stove was embossed with the name of a farm three miles down the valley.

She found a chair eventually, behind the door, where it had been tucked. She sat. She ate the third oatcake and left the fourth on the plate, in case she woke hungry. She drew the curtain across the bedroom doorway. She did not think she would sleep, but she was tired from the train and from the long road that followed the river, and she lay down on the narrow bed with her shoes still on and the crescent-moon key in her pocket, and almost at once the room went dark behind her eyes and she was gone.

The dream, if it was a dream, involved thirteen and a clock that would not stop ticking.

She woke in the small hours, unsure what had roused her. The room was dark. The stove was cold. The honey jar caught a dim gleam from somewhere and threw it back, small and round.

Then she heard it.

A sound, below her. Beneath the floorboards. A low, rhythmic ticking, unhurried and precise, that did not match the cadence of any clock she had ever encountered. It was too slow for a seconds pendulum. Too even for the small Irish movement she had once owned. It did not sound mechanical at all. It sounded, if such a thing could be said to sound, like a heartbeat. A heartbeat rendered in gears.

Tick. Tick. Tick.

Mira lay still. The floorboard beneath her ear was warm.

After a long moment, she rose and went to the workshop. She knelt. She pressed her palm flat against the pine. The wood was cool here. But there, a hand's width to the left, it was warm again, and the warmth pulsed in time with the sound, and the sound pulsed in time with nothing she knew.

She sat back on her heels.

The note was still on the table. D's round handwriting. The walls will talk by Tuesday. Ignore them.

But it was not the walls that were talking. It was the floor. And the sound it made was not the sound of water in pipes, nor of settling beams, nor of any settlement at all. It was the sound of something that had been wound up long ago by some hand she could not see, and that would not stop until some hand she could not imagine decided to let it rest.

In the kitchen below the workshop, beneath the bakery ovens and the warmth of the morning bread, something kept its time, as it had kept it for a hundred and forty years, and would keep it for a hundred and forty more unless Mira Thornwick, who had only just arrived and did not yet know the name of a single neighbor or the color of the church roof, decided otherwise.

The honey jar caught the last of the moonlight.

Tick. Tick. Tick.

She did not sleep again that night.

light touched the dial of the Millhaven clock when Daphne burst through the door of Aldric Pfenning's shop without knocking, as was her custom.

"I know you said not to bother you before seven," she announced, breathless, her boots leaving wet prints on the floorboards, "but the new lady, the one with the green trunk, she was standing in the middle of her kitchen at half past four in the morning staring at the floor like it had done something rude to her."

Aldric did not look up from the escapement he was adjusting. His fingers, thin and spotted with age, continued their precise movement. The tweezers held a hairspring no thicker than a spider's thread.

"Many floors," he said, "have done rude things to many people."

"This one was ticking."

The tweezers paused. Aldric's gaze remained fixed on the brass coil before him, but his attention had shifted, the way a hound's ears shift while its nose remains buried in a scent.

"Most floors," he said, after a moment, "do not tick."

"This one did. I heard it through the wall. Put my ear to the plaster and everything. It went tick tick tick, very slow, very regular, like a clock that wasn't trying to be a clock."

Aldric set down the tweezers. He removed his loupe. He folded his hands on the workbench and regarded the girl with the expression he reserved for occasions when he wished to appear less interested than he was.

"What," he said, "did the new lady do?"

"She got down on her knees and pressed her hand to the boards. She stayed there for ages. Then she went to bed, but I don't think she slept, because the candle stayed lit until the birds started."

"Mm."

"Aldric. What is under that bakery?"

He stood. His joints made the small sounds they always made, like a drawer opening. He took from the hook by the door his black coat, brushed it once across the sleeves, and drew it on.

"We are not," he said, "going to find out."

"But I want to find out."

"That is why," he said, "we are not going to find out."

Daphne's face fell in the theatrical way that only eleven-year-old faces fall. She trailed him to the door, hopping from foot to foot on the wet step.

"But what if it's something dangerous?"

"Then," said Aldric, "it has been dangerous for a hundred and forty years, and will likely continue to be dangerous for a hundred and forty more. Danger, Daphne, does not become more dangerous because one has noticed it."

"What if it's a body?"

"Old bones do not tick."

"What if it's a heart?"

Aldric stopped on the cobbles. He looked down at her. The morning had not yet decided what kind of morning it wished to be. The lamplighter was making his rounds behind them, the soft hiss of his pole punctuating the silence.

"A heart," Aldric said, "is a clock of a particular kind. One that requires winding only once, and stops only when it is ready."

"So you don't know what's under there."

"I did not say that."

"But you won't tell me."

"I did not say that either."

"Then what are you saying?"

Aldric Pfenning put his hands behind his back, a habit of his that Daphne had learned to recognize as the prelude to either wisdom or evasion, and in his case, it was difficult to tell the two apart.

"I am saying," he said, "that there are certain mechanisms in this town which were installed long before either of us was born, and which will continue to turn long after we have been removed from the turning. Some of these mechanisms are clocks. Some are not clocks but have been dressed as clocks. Some are neither clocks nor dressed as clocks but are tolerated as if they were, because the alternative to tolerating them is to explain them, and there is no one left alive who can."

Daphne digested this. Her brow furrowed. Her mouth opened, closed, opened again.

"Is one of those mechanisms under the bakery?"

"Yes."

"Which one?"

"The oldest."

"Is it dangerous?"

"To whom?"

"To me. To the new lady. To the bread."

Aldric considered the question with the gravity he gave to all questions, even the small ones, which in his experience were rarely small.

"To the bread," he said, "no. To the new lady, only if she asks the wrong question of the wrong beam at the wrong hour. To you," he added, looking down at her, "not at all, because I am going to ask you, as a personal favor to me, not to put your ear to that wall again."

"Why?"

"Because," said Aldric Pfenning, "the last person who did put her ear to that wall was your grandmother, and she heard it for the rest of her life, and it made her a very particular kind of happy that I do not wish upon you until you are at least forty and have a steadier hand for it."

Daphne's eyes widened. "Grandmother heard it?"

"Your grandmother heard everything. She simply chose," said Aldric, "to listen to most of it in private."

The lamplighter passed them. The gas lamps on the High Street popped and steadied into their yellow flame. Somewhere, a rooster attempted the hour and failed, producing instead a sound like a man clearing his throat in a small room.

"Will you tell her?" Daphne asked. "The new lady. Will you tell her what's down there?"

Aldric buttoned his coat. He adjusted his cuffs. He took from his waistcoat pocket the small silver key he always carried, the one that opened the inner door of the clock tower, and he turned it over in his fingers the way other men turn over coins or worry beads.

"I will tell her," he said, "exactly what I have told you, which is nothing, and which is, in this town, the same as telling her everything."

"And if she keeps asking?"

"Then I will refer her," said Aldric, "to the beams, and the beams will refer her to the floor, and the floor will refer her to whatever has been keeping its own time down there since before the railway and the gasworks and the great flood of eighteen thirty-seven."

He looked up at the sky. It had decided. It was going to be a clear morning, the kind of morning that made him wish, briefly, that he were a different sort of man, one who noticed the weather.

"Go home, Daphne. Tell your mother I will take my tea at the usual hour. And do not," he added, with a precision that was almost tender, "mention the new lady's floor to anyone."

"Not even Thistle?"

"Especially not Thistle. Thistle already knows, and Thistle knowing is half the trouble."

Daphne nodded. She turned, hopped once on the cobbles, then turned back.

"Aldric?"

"Mm."

"If the new lady hears it too, the way Grandmother did, will she be happy?"

Aldric stood for a moment in the new light, the silver key still turning between his fingers, his black coat buttoned to the throat, his face the face of a man who had outlived a great many things and intended to outlive a few more.

"That," he said, "is not for me to decide."

He turned. He walked toward the clock tower. Behind him, Daphne ran in the opposite direction, her bright voice already lifted toward her mother's window with the news that there was a new lady in town who had a floor that ticked, and that Aldric Pfenning had not said it wasn't a heart, and that she, Daphne, intended to find out for herself before the week was out, if not before breakfast.

Aldric climbed the winding stair of the tower. He set the silver key in its lock. He turned it.

Somewhere beneath the town, in a place that was neither cellar nor foundation nor any category known to surveyors, the mechanism that was not a clock but had been dressed as one continued its patient count.

Aldric climbed the stairs.

The mechanism did not look up.

It did not need to.

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