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The Hollow Beneath the Gallows Tree: The Road to Greyhollow

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Chapter 1 of 20

Dust boiled behind the battered fender of Caleb March's pickup, swallowing the road in a brown haze that tasted of limestone and dried tobacco. The morning sun climbed above the ridge in a white smear, and the gravel popped and pinged beneath the chassis. His hand rode the top of the steering wheel at ten and two, thumb tapping a rhythm against the cracked vinyl. The truck was a 1994 Chevrolet, faded burgundy where the paint had not flaked to primer, a machine held together by habit and baling wire. He had bought it from a man in Buckhannon for six hundred dollars and a case of bourbon. The man had not asked questions. Neither had Caleb.

He had questions of his own.

The road narrowed as it pressed deeper into the hollow, shoulders of oak and hickory crowding close, leaves still furled tight against the undecided spring. Somewhere ahead, a creek ran over stones, and the sound carried on air that smelled of wet moss and last autumn's rot. A sign leaned at a forty-five-degree angle, its letters faded to suggestion: GREYHO--OW. Population unknown. Caleb had checked the census records before driving out. The last official count dated to 1987, when the township had recorded two hundred and eleven souls. Since then, nothing. The county had lost interest, or perhaps lost track. Greyhollow had slipped between the administrative cracks, a place that existed on paper but did not file taxes.

His appointment was different this trip. The county wanted the courthouse basement pumped out, that water-damaged repository of forgotten records dragged into the light, and they wanted a current census to justify the expense. Caleb had taken the job because the pay was steady and the drive was scenic, and because he had learned that the places no one wanted to count were the places that needed it most. He also had a letter in his jacket pocket from a woman in Charleston, written in a careful script, mentioning a name. The name was not important yet. The letter was.

The gravel gave way to a strip of cracked asphalt, and the trees parted like curtains drawn back from a stage. Greyhollow spread before him in the slanting morning light, a single street of storefronts with faded awnings, a feed store with its windows boarded over, a diner that looked operational, a post office that probably was not. A water tower rose above the roofline, its legs planted in a patch of dead grass, the tank sagging toward the east as if listening. A single pickup sat in front of the diner, blue and rust-streaked, and a dog of indeterminate breed lifted its head from the porch steps to watch the stranger arrive.

Caleb killed the engine and sat for a moment, listening to the tick of cooling metal. He reached for the notebook in his breast pocket, a composition book with a marbled cover, its pages already dense with his handwriting. He flipped past his notes on population methodology and his interview protocols to a blank page and wrote the date at the top in neat block letters. He underlined it twice. Then he opened the truck door and stepped out into air that tasted of woodsmoke and old concrete.

He crossed the street toward the diner, boots crunching on asphalt that needed resurfacing three administrations ago. The bell above the door chimed a flat, tarnished note as he entered, and the interior smelled of bacon grease and fresh coffee, the scent so immediate and thick it seemed to have weight. A counter ran the length of the room, its surface dull with decades of wiped spills, and four stools stood in a row, only one occupied. A man sat hunched over a cup of coffee, his hat tipped forward, his hands wrapped around the mug as if drawing warmth from the porcelain. He did not look up.

The cook stood behind the pass-through, a woman of perhaps sixty with silver hair pulled back in a bun and an apron that had been white in another century. She studied Caleb with the frank appraisal of someone who did not see many new faces and did not trust the few she did.

"You're the census man," she said. It was not a question.

Caleb touched the brim of his hat. "Caleb March. County sent me."

"County," she repeated, the word carrying the weight of an entire institution's neglect. She poured a cup of coffee without asking and slid it across the counter. "Sit down. You want eggs."

"I want information," Caleb said.

"You want eggs," she repeated, firmer, and cracked four of them into a cast-iron skillet that hissed and spat. "Information comes with breakfast. House rule."

He took a stool at the counter and opened his notebook to the page he had marked. He uncapped his pen and held it poised above the paper.

"How many people live here?" he asked.

The cook turned the eggs with a spatula. "Depends what you mean by live."

He waited. She did not elaborate. The man at the other end of the counter stirred his coffee, the spoon clinking against ceramic in a slow rhythm.

"I'm asking about residents," Caleb said. "Year-round. People who sleep here most nights."

The cook shrugged, a motion that involved her entire upper body. "Couple hundred. Maybe fewer. Some went south for the winter and didn't come back. Some went north and came back wrong." She slid the eggs onto a plate and set it before him with a glass of water. "Eat."

He picked up his fork. The eggs were perfect, the whites set but the yolks still trembling, and he had not eaten anything this good in a month.

"Where's the courthouse?" he said between bites.

She pointed with the spatula toward the window. "End of the street. Brick building, can't miss it. Basement's flooded, been that way since the storm of oh-eight. Rats built condominiums down there."

He made a note. "Who do I talk to about township records?"

"Old Harlan," she said. "Lives in the cottage at the edge of the commons. He'll know more than he tells you. He always does."

Caleb nodded and made another note, the pen scratching against the paper with a sound like a cricket. He glanced toward the man at the end of the counter, who had still not looked up.

"Morning," Caleb said.

The man raised his head slowly, revealing a face weathered to the color and texture of old leather, eyes the pale blue of faded denim. He studied Caleb for a long moment, the silence thick enough to spread on toast.

"You're the count man," the man said.

Caleb set down his fork. "Census taker."

"Same thing," the man said. He took a sip of coffee and returned his attention to the liquid. "You going to count the ones that ain't here too?"

The question hung in the air between them, and Caleb felt the weight of it settle on his shoulders. He had been asked similar questions in similar towns, places where the population had thinned to a number that did not match the number of names spoken over suppers, where the living and the dead occupied the same addresses in different ways. He had learned that the question was rarely about statistics.

"Everybody counts," Caleb said carefully.

The man grunted, a sound that might have been agreement or might have been warning. He set his cup down, stood, and dropped two crumpled dollars on the counter. He walked past Caleb without another word, boots heavy on the floorboards, and the bell above the door chimed his departure.

The cook watched him go. "That's Walt Calloway," she said. "Lost his wife two years back. Buried her up on the hill and visits her every Sunday. Talks to her about the price of corn."

Caleb wrote the name in his notebook, then looked up. "You said there were children here."

"Six," she said. "The Voss children. Mother died when the youngest was born. Father drank himself into the ground a year later. Now they're on their own, more or less. The oldest girl's maybe sixteen. She counts things."

"Counts things?"

"She counts everything. Steps. Boards. Breath. You watch her, you'll see."

Caleb made another note, his pen moving in tight, precise strokes. He finished his eggs and pushed the plate aside. "What does she count for?"

The cook was silent for a moment, longer than the conversation had warranted. She refilled his coffee, the stream black and steaming, the aroma rising like a signal.

"She counts the living," the cook said finally. "And then she counts the dead. And then she counts the difference."

The words sat on the counter between them like a third cup. Caleb did not write them down. Some things were not for notebooks. He left a five on the counter and touched the brim of his hat.

"Thank you for the eggs," he said.

"Don't thank me," she said. "Just don't forget to count us."

The bell chimed behind him as he stepped back onto the street. The morning had warmed slightly, the sun now high enough to throw real shadows, and a breeze moved through the hollow carrying the scent of the creek and something else, something faintly sweet and slightly wrong, like flowers left too long in water. He stood for a moment at the edge of the diner's shadow, notebook in his breast pocket, pen in his hand, and looked down the single street of Greyhollow toward the brick building at its end.

The courthouse waited at the street's terminus, its facade stained dark where water had run and dried, its steps cracked and lifted by roots. A flagpole stood beside it, the flag absent or stolen, the halyard slapping against the metal in a slow, arrhythmic beat. Beside the courthouse, at the edge of the commons, a cottage hunched beneath a stand of oaks, its porch sagging, its windows reflecting the sky in broken panes. A figure sat on the porch in a rocking chair, still as a photograph, watching the road.

Caleb started walking.

The diner faded behind him, its warmth replaced by the cooler air of the commons. Caleb crossed the cracked asphalt of the parking lot and stepped onto a path worn through the center of the commons, the dirt pale where generations of feet had pressed the grass away. A rusted gas station occupied the near corner where the path met the road, its pumps listing at angles, their glass faces cracked and clouded, a hand-lettered sign reading CLOSED tied across one nozzle with fraying twine. Behind the station, a skeletal awning sagged over two pumps that had not seen fuel in years, and beyond them, a repair bay stood open to the weather, its concrete floor stained with decades of oil that had hardened into a dark, cracked skin.

An old man sat on an overturned crate beneath the awning's shade, a cane across his knees, a collie asleep at his feet. He wore coveralls faded to the color of dust, and his hands, large and scarred, turned a pocketknife against a piece of pine, the shavings curling at his feet. He did not look up as Caleb approached, though his hands slowed on the wood.

"Morning," Caleb said.

The old man did not answer immediately. He finished the curl of wood, let it fall, and then raised his eyes. They were the color of river stones, pale and depthless, and they settled on Caleb's face with the patience of someone who had stopped being surprised by strangers a long time ago.

"You're the counter," he said. Not a question.

Caleb stopped. "The what?"

"The counter." The old man gestured with the knife toward the courthouse at the end of the street. "Census fellow. Comes through every few years. Counts us like livestock, marks us in the book, moves on." He returned to his carving, the blade moving in a slow, practiced rhythm. "You're early this time. Or late. Hard to say."

"Early," Caleb said. "Trying to beat the weather."

The old man snorted. "Weather's not what's going to beat you."

The collie lifted its head, sniffed the air in Caleb's direction, and lowered its chin back onto its paws with a sound like a sigh. The old man watched the dog and then turned his pale eyes back to Caleb, and there was a stillness in him that felt older than his years, a caution worn smooth by use.

"You fixing to be here past dark?" he asked.

Caleb considered the question. His instructions had been vague, a sum sufficient for three days at the inn if the inn still took guests, a note from the state office reminding him that the records were decades out of date and that accuracy was paramount. He had planned to start at the courthouse, work outward through the houses, and finish by week's end.

"I don't know yet," he said honestly.

The old man studied him. The knife paused mid-cut.

"Well," he said, "I'll tell you something for free, since you asked polite and you got a hat on." He leaned forward on his crate, the cane shifting against his knees. "Greyhollow sleeps different at night. Different than other places. Different than what you'd expect. The daylight is the daylight. The dark is the dark. But there's a kind of hour between, an hour most folks don't notice, when the shadows get longer than they should and the air gets heavy, and things that ought to be sleeping wake up." He tapped the flat of the blade against his palm. "You finish your work before the sun goes down, you hear me? You get your numbers and you get back to that inn or that diner or wherever you've got a roof, and you stay there until morning. Don't go wandering the commons after dark. Don't go up to the gallows tree. Don't go down to the creek. You just stay put."

Caleb felt the warning settle into him, heavier than the words alone could account for. He thought of the cook's words, the count of the living and the dead and the difference, and he felt the two warnings lean against each other like bookends.

"What happens after dark?" he asked.

The old man smiled, and the smile did not reach his eyes. "Nothing," he said. "Nothing at all. That's what I'm supposed to tell you, and that's what I'll say if anyone asks. Nothing happens after dark in Greyhollow. Not a thing." He resumed his carving, the knife biting into the wood with renewed purpose. "You just make sure you got your work done before the nothing starts."

Caleb stood for a moment longer, the breeze moving through the hollow and stirring the collie's fur, carrying again that faint sweet wrongness, flowers left too long in water. He thought about asking more. He thought about the notebook and the questions it required and the years of practice that had taught him when to press and when to wait. The old man had given him what he was willing to give, and pressing would only close the door.

"Thank you," Caleb said.

The old man did not look up. "Name's Harlan," he said, as if offering a receipt. "Been here longer than most. Longer than the records, probably, though I won't say so to the state folks if you come asking." He turned the wood in his hands, examining his work. "You want the real count, you come find me when you're done with your book. I'll tell you what's missing that you'll never find in the ledgers."

"What do you mean, missing?"

Harlan smiled again, that same empty smile. "I mean the ledgers count what got written down. And there's things in this hollow that don't care much for being written down." He set the knife aside and rested his hands on the head of the cane. "You go on now. The courthouse won't wait, and the clerk's a jittery sort. Likes to get the business done before noon."

Caleb touched the brim of his hat. The old man nodded once, a dismissal and a benediction both, and returned to his pine. Caleb stepped back onto the path and walked toward the courthouse, and he did not look back, though he felt the weight of Harlan's pale eyes on his shoulders all the way to the street.

The courthouse doors were heavy oak, swollen with humidity, and they resisted his hand before giving way with a groan that carried through the empty vestibule. The air inside was cool and still, layered with the smell of old paper and furniture polish and something fainter beneath, a mineral tang like wet stone. A wooden staircase climbed the far wall, its banister worn to a pale shine, and to his left, a hallway stretched into dimness, its floorboards dustless and its walls lined with framed portraits whose eyes followed him as he passed.

A door stood open halfway down the hall, a wedge of yellow light spilling onto the planks. Caleb approached and rapped his knuckles against the jamb.

"Come," said a voice, high and tight, like a fiddle string wound too far.

The clerk's office was a single room, square and low-ceilinged, furnished with a desk the size of a coffin and three chairs, two for visitors and one for the man who sat behind the desk with his hands folded and his eyes too wide. He was thin in the way of men who had spent their lives indoors, his wrists sharp under his cuffs, his hair combed across a scalp that showed pink through the combings. A nameplate on the desk read EZEKIEL PIKE in brass letters, though whether the man or the office held the name, Caleb could not tell.

"Mr. Pike," Caleb said, and offered his credentials. "Caleb March, state census office. I'm here to update the township records."

Pike took the papers with fingers that trembled at the edges. He examined them closely, his lips moving as he traced the lines, and then he set them down and folded his hands again, and the trembling moved into his voice.

"March," he said. "Yes. We received word. Though we thought perhaps you had been delayed, or changed your mind, or been warned off." He glanced toward the window, where the flagpole stood empty, and then back to Caleb. "You are alone?"

"I am."

"No escort? No constabulary? No one from the county seat to accompany you?"

"No."

Pike nodded, a short, tight motion, as if confirming a fear. "Then we shall have to make do. The records are in the vault behind me. I will retrieve them presently, once we have established the terms of your visit." He opened a drawer and produced a form, blank, and a pen, and slid them across the desk. "You will note that the township assumes no liability for any incident occurring during the course of your duties, and that you will conduct your enumeration between the hours of sunrise and sunset, exclusive of the twilight hour, which the township considers ambiguous and therefore off-limits to official business."

Caleb looked at the form. The language was peculiar, the kind that lawyers loved and clerks quoted like scripture. He picked up the pen.

"What happens during the twilight hour?" he asked.

Pike's eyes went wider, if that were possible. "Nothing," he said, too quickly. "Nothing of consequence. The hour is merely a matter of local custom. The council prefers that official business be conducted in full daylight, for the avoidance of irregularities in the record."

"And what of the gallows tree? I'm told it's on township property."

Pike's face drained of what little color it had. His mouth opened, closed, opened again. "The gallows tree," he said, "is not on township property. The gallows tree is on the commons, which is held in trust by no one in particular and therefore is no concern of this office. You will not approach the gallows tree. You will not inquire about the gallows tree. You will not, under any circumstances, conduct any portion of your enumeration at or near the gallows tree."

Caleb set the pen down. "Why not?"

Pike pressed his folded hands against the wood of the desk, as if trying to push himself through it. "Because the gallows tree is where we put the things we do not wish to count," he said, and his voice dropped to a whisper, "and if you go there, they will not let you leave without counting them."

The clock on the wall ticked. The flagpole outside creaked. Somewhere distant, a dog began to bark and then stopped, cut short, as if silenced by a hand across its muzzle.

"I see," Caleb said, though he did not, not fully. He picked up the pen again and signed the form at the bottom, and Pike exhaled as if he had been holding his breath since Caleb entered the room. The clerk rose, his knees cracking, and crossed to a cabinet of dark iron that stood in the corner behind the desk. He produced a key from his vest, unlocked the cabinet, and drew out a ledger bound in cracked leather, its spine held together with thread.

"The records," Pike said, and set it on the desk between them. "The population of Greyhollow, such as it is, for the past forty years. You will find them complete, or as complete as we have been able to keep them, given the circumstances."

"What circumstances?"

Pike did not answer. He sat down behind his desk and folded his hands again, and the trembling had moved from his fingers into the fabric of his sleeves, a fine vibration that made the cuffs flutter like trapped moths.

"The inn," Caleb said, "is it still taking guests?"

"The inn is open," Pike said. "The innkeeper will see to your room. The inn is on the square, you cannot miss it. You will take your meals at the diner, or at the inn, and you will conduct your work in the daylight hours, and you will not stray from the marked paths on the commons, and you will not approach the gallows tree, and you will finish your work and leave Greyhollow before the week is out." He looked up, and his eyes were the eyes of a man who had given the same instructions many times and had watched them fail more than once. "Do you understand, Mr. March?"

"I understand," Caleb said, though his understanding was a house with no roof, open to whatever sky might fall through it.

Pike nodded. "Then we shall begin."

The ledger sat between them like a dare.

Caleb reached for it with hands that knew the weight of paper, the give of old binding, the particular resistance of pages stuck together by years and damp. The leather was soft with handling, the thread at the spine fuzzy with age, and when he opened the cover the smell rose up, musty and sweet, the ghost of ink and dust and a room where a fire had been lit and allowed to die. He turned the first page and saw a careful hand, ink brown with age, names arranged in columns under the headings Resident, Dwelling, Age, and Condition. The earliest entry was dated 1883, and the names were familiar to him, the way all small-town names become familiar, Smith and Brown and Calloway, with here and there a Holt or a Voss or a March tucked in among them.

He turned the pages. The hand changed, sometimes, when a new clerk took up the work, but the columns remained the same, and the names remained the same, and the years advanced in the neat, unhurried fashion of a place that believed it had time. He read, and the reading was easy, the way reading is easy when the text offers nothing to surprise, and he let his eyes move down the columns and his mind move elsewhere, to the weight of the satchel in the corner, to the way the rain had eased and then resumed, to the way the sheriff's hands had not stopped trembling since he had sat down.

It was on the page dated three years previous that he saw it.

The hand was Pike's, he was sure of it, the same careful, clerkly script, the same habit of pressing too hard on the downstrokes. The names were familiar. The numbers were familiar. But in the margin, beside the entry for one Ezekiel Holt, aged forty-two, dwelling on the south side of the commons, a single word had been added in a different ink, a different pressure, a different hand.

Reclaimed.

Caleb looked up. Pike was watching him, and the watching was the watching of a man who had been waiting for a particular thing to happen and had not known when it would.

"What does that mean?" Caleb said.

"It means," Pike said, and stopped. The clock on the wall ticked twice, a dry, unhurried sound. "It means the township was satisfied with the record. It means there is nothing further to note. It means, Mr. March, that the column for Condition was filled in, and the entry was closed."

"The entry was closed," Caleb said. "The man was not dead. The man is buried under the gallows tree, if I understood the mayor correctly. The man is, by any reasonable definition, not in a condition to have his entry closed."

"You are not from here," Pike said. "You do not know what the word means here."

"Then teach me."

Pike did not answer at once. He reached across the desk and closed the ledger with a soft, definitive sound, and his hand lingered on the cover, and his eyes were the eyes of a man who had been carrying a weight for a long time and had begun, in some private way, to hope that someone would offer to take it.

"Not today," he said. "Tomorrow, perhaps, if you are still of a mind. Today you will have your inn, and your dinner, and your sleep. Tomorrow you will begin your count, and the count will take you where it takes you, and we shall see what we shall see. Do you find that satisfactory, Mr. March?"

Caleb found nothing about it satisfactory. He had learned, in the long years of moving from one small town to the next, that the words we shall see were the words a man used when he intended to steer the outcome and did not wish to be seen doing it. He had also learned that the words we shall see were often the last honest words a man would speak, and that the men who used them were the men who had something to show and were looking, in their own crooked way, for a witness.

"Satisfactory enough," he said, and stood, and the satchel was on his shoulder, and the ledger was under his arm, because Pike had not asked for it back, and he had not offered it, and the not-offering was a small, deliberate thing, the kind of thing that a man notices and a woman notices and a boy of twelve notices, and that the person who did it believes, perhaps, that no one has noticed at all.

Pike rose when he rose, which was a courtesy Caleb had not expected, and walked him to the door, and opened it, and the rain had stopped, and the afternoon had turned the color of pewter, and the air smelled of wet stone and wood smoke and the green, insistent smell of the hills. The square was quiet. The man on the bench was gone. The boy in the doorway across the way had not moved, and his eyes followed Caleb down the steps and across the flagstones, and Caleb felt the weight of that attention the way a man feels the weight of a hand laid on his shoulder in a dark room.

"Mr. March," Pike said, from the doorway.

Caleb stopped and turned.

"Eat well," Pike said. "Sleep well. And do not, under any circumstance, go down to the courthouse after dark."

The courthouse was behind him, its empty windows looking out at nothing, its clock still ticking, and Caleb looked at it over his shoulder and then at Pike and then at the square, and the boy was still watching, and the watching was the watching of a child who has been told to watch and is determined to do it well.

"I will bear it in mind," Caleb said.

He crossed the square toward the inn, and the satchel bumped his hip, and the ledger was warm under his arm, and the rain began again, a thin, persistent mist that settled on his coat and on his hat and on the shoulders of the boy in the doorway, who did not go in, and did not move, and watched him all the way to the inn's porch, and was still watching, Caleb was sure of it, when the door closed behind him and the warmth of the fire and the smell of the kitchen folded over him like a hand.

The innkeeper was a stout woman with red arms and a voice that carried, and she gave him a room at the front of the house and a plate of stew and a glass of cider and a candle, and she told him, in the way of innkeepers everywhere, that breakfast was at six and dinner was at six and that the front door was locked at nine and that if he wanted anything in between he was to come downstairs and ask for it like a Christian.

"The courthouse," Caleb said, when she had set the plate down. "Is it open after hours?"

The innkeeper's hands stilled on the table. The stillness was the stillness of a woman who has been asked a question she does not intend to answer, and Caleb saw it, and she saw that he saw it, and the seeing was a small, quiet thing between them, a recognition, a sort of treaty.

"The courthouse is open during business hours," she said. "After business hours it is closed, and the sheriff has the key, and the sheriff is the only one who has the key, and the sheriff does not, as a rule, lend it."

"Thank you," Caleb said.

"You're welcome," she said, and took herself off, and the door closed behind her, and the room was quiet, and the rain was on the window, and the ledger sat on the table beside the plate, and Caleb ate his stew and drank his cider and turned the pages of the ledger by candlelight, and the names passed under his thumb, and the years passed, and the word Reclaimed appeared again, and again, and again, a small, deliberate wound in the margin of a record that was otherwise unblemished.

He read until the candle guttered. He read until the rain stopped and started and stopped again. He read until the names were no longer names but a kind of music, a kind of weather, a kind of weather that had been building for a long time and was, at last, ready to break.

He put out the candle. He did not sleep.

At half past one, when the inn was quiet and the square was quiet and the only sound was the sound of the rain, Caleb rose, and dressed, and took the candle and the ledger, and went down the stairs, and out the door, and across the square to the courthouse, whose front door was, as the innkeeper had said, locked, and whose windows were, as the sheriff had implied, dark.

The basement door was on the east side of the building, set below the grade of the street, half hidden by a privet hedge that had grown wild. Caleb found it by feel, by memory, by the particular instinct of a man who has spent his life going where he has been told not to go, and the door was ajar, and the ajar was not an accident, because a door of that weight, of that age, of that hinge, does not stand ajar on its own.

He pushed it open. The smell rose up, damp stone and old paper and the faint, sweet, unmistakable smell of something that had been where it should not have been for a long time. He went down.

The stairs were narrow and the walls were close and the candle threw his shadow up the well ahead of him, enormous and wavering, and at the bottom the basement opened into a low, vaulted space lined with shelving, and the shelving held boxes, and the boxes held papers, and the papers held, he was sure of it, the rest of the record, the part that Pike had not shown him, the part that the word Reclaimed was meant to point at and, at the same time, to hide.

He set the candle on a shelf. He opened the nearest box. The paper inside was older than the ledger, and the hand was older, and the columns were the same, and the names were the same, and the years advanced, and the years stopped, and the years began again, and the word Reclaimed appeared in the margin in a hand he did not recognize, a hand that was not Pike's and not the clerk's and not any hand he had seen in the ledgers above, and the word appeared, and reappeared, and reappeared, and the candle burned, and the basement was quiet, and the rain was on the street above, and Caleb read, and the reading was the reading of a man who has, at last, found the door that everyone in Greyhollow has been standing in front of, and has, at last, decided to open.

The candle guttered. The basement was quiet. The record was open. The night, and the town, and the work, had only just begun.

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