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The Thorns of Nightshade: The Gates of Vaelmorr

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Chapter 2 of 20

The bone-white gates rose from the ash like the ribs of something long dead, and Elara Nightshade paused at their base to adjust the weight of her satchel. The straps had been cutting into her shoulders for the last three miles, and the dried herbs bundled within crackled with every shift. She was a traveling herbalist, her papers said, come to sell remedies to the foundry workers and their families. Her hair was plaited tightly beneath a dust-colored scarf, and her hands were stained with the green-brown of crushed marigold. She had practiced the look for weeks, the way a woman of small commerce might eye the gates of a city that had no love for strangers.

The Eternal Forge, that black and burning heart of Vaelmorr, coughed a slow plume of ash into the sky. It drifted over the gatehouse and settled on Elara's shoulders, gritty and faintly warm, carrying the metallic taste of scorched air. Somewhere beyond the walls she could hear the clang and hiss of iron being worked, a rhythm that never stopped, day or night. The sound had been louder as she approached the city, and now it lived in her teeth.

A line of travelers stretched before her, perhaps two dozen souls, all of them quiet in the way that people become quiet when they stand before a gate that could swallow them. There were peddlers with handcarts, a pair of laborers from the southern farms with mud still on their boots, a woman holding the hand of a child whose eyes were too large for its face. Elara took her place behind a tinker who smelled of solder and onions, and she waited.

The gate was not one arch but two, set into a curtain wall of pale stone that had been bleached further by years of falling ash. Soldiers in the gray-and-black of the city watch stood at intervals along the rampart above, their faces hidden behind visored helms. From this distance their armor looked like the carapace of some jointed insect, dull and unyielding. The symbol of Vaelmorr, a hammer crossed with a chain, had been carved into the stone above the gates and filled with soot so that it seemed to weep black tears.

A shout from the gatehouse. A merchant ahead of her was being pulled aside, his cart tipped, his goods scattered across the flagstones with a sound like breaking teeth. The watchmen moved with the bored efficiency of men who had done this a thousand times. They did not draw steel, but their hands rested on the pommels of short swords, and their eyes were the color of old iron. The merchant's voice rose in protest, then fell, then was gone. A second man was waved through, a third refused entirely and turned back toward the road with the hunched shoulders of the newly dispossessed.

Elara felt the small vial at her hip, the one she had promised herself she would not need. It pressed against her thigh through the fabric of her coat, a thin glass cylinder no longer than her finger, sealed with wax and holding a liquid the color of weak tea. The herbalist's remedy for stubborn cough, her papers called it. The truth was more complicated, and more dangerous, and she would rather have swallowed the vial whole than have a watchman find it.

The line shuffled forward. Elara kept her gaze on the back of the tinker's neck and breathed in through her nose, out through her mouth, the way her old nurse had taught her to breathe before a ball at court. A lifetime ago. A different name. A different woman, in silk rather than sacking, with rubies at her throat instead of ash.

"Hold there."

The voice came from the gate itself, not from any of the soldiers on the wall. A man had stepped out from under the arch, into the light, and he was looking directly at her. He was older than the others, his beard trimmed close to a jaw that seemed to have been carved from the same pale stone as the wall behind him. His armor was the same gray-black, but the hammer-and-chain at his breast had been picked out in a thin line of silver. An officer. A warden of some rank.

Elara inclined her head, the way a country woman might to a man of obvious authority, and stepped out of the line to stand before him. Up close, she could see the small scars at the corners of his eyes, the kind that came from a lifetime of squinting into forges. He smelled of hot metal and of a soap that failed to cover the smell of hot metal. His eyes were the color of slate, and they moved over her the way a buyer might move over a horse.

"Papers."

She handed him the folded document without hesitation, and he took it with a grunt. His fingers were thick, the knuckles swollen, and there was a callus on the side of his index finger from years of writing. He read slowly, mouthing some of the words, and she could feel the eyes of the line behind her pressing against the back of her neck.

"Dalla Crane," he read, and looked up. "Herbalist. From the lowlands."

"Yes, warden. Come to sell."

He made a small sound in his throat that was not quite a laugh. "We have herbalists."

"You have people who call themselves herbalists." She let a small, professional smile touch her mouth. "I have thirty years of remedies, learned at my mother's knee and tested on every cough and fever from here to the sea."

"Thirty years." His gaze dropped to her face, then lower, to her hands. "You don't look thirty."

"I started young, warden. The gift runs in the family."

He turned the paper over, examined the seal, which was a convincing forgery she had paid a great deal of coin to obtain, and then handed it back. But he did not step aside.

"Open the satchel."

"Of course." She set it down on the flagstones between them and loosened the leather thong with fingers she forced to be steady. The smell of dried chamomile and sage rose up, earthy and faintly sweet, the honest smell of a working woman's trade. She tilted the bag toward him, and he crouched with a creak of leather and metal to peer inside.

He saw the bunches of dried herbs, tied with twine and labeled in a neat hand. He saw the small mortar and pestle, the rolls of clean linen, the jar of rendered fat for salves. His hand moved them aside without delicacy, and his eyes narrowed when his fingers found the small wooden box at the bottom. The box was unremarkable, the kind any herbalist might carry, and she had packed it carefully with the things she most needed to protect, including a thin knife that had been her father's and a folded square of parchment covered in a cipher she had written herself.

He opened the box.

Inside, nestled in a scrap of wool, lay a row of small glass vials, each one stoppered and sealed with wax. The liquid in them was pale, ranging from clear to a faint amber. The warden lifted one and held it to the light. The ash drifted down around them both, and a flake of it settled on the glass, and he wiped it away with his thumb and sniffed the stopper.

"Cough mixture," Elara said, and she let the patience of a woman who had been asked this before enter her voice. "That one is for the winter fevers that come off the river. The blue one is for sleeplessness. The red is a poultice for burns, though the workers at the Forge have their own ways, I am told."

He did not put the vial down. Instead he looked at her, and the look was longer than it needed to be. The clang of iron from beyond the walls seemed to grow louder, as if the Forge itself was leaning closer to listen. The line behind her had gone very still. She could feel the woman with the child shift her weight, and the child made a small sound and was hushed.

"You have steady hands, Dalla Crane."

"For an herbalist?"

"For a woman of any kind." He tilted his head a fraction. "Most women would be trembling by now, with a warden holding their wares. You look as if you were waiting for me to find something."

Elara's smile did not waver, though a cold thread ran down her spine. "I was waiting for you to be satisfied, warden. There is a difference. I have crossed three borders to reach Vaelmorr, and I have no wish to be turned back at the last. I have a cousin in the lower wards who is waiting for me, and she has a daughter with a cough that has lasted the winter. If you would like to inspect the mixtures, I will open each one for you and you may taste them yourself, if you trust the tongue of an old woman from the lowlands."

A beat of silence. The warden's slate eyes searched her face, and she let him look. She had practiced this, too. She had stood before a mirror in a rented room in a village a day's ride from the city and had practiced the way a woman of fifty might hold her mouth, the way the skin at the corners of her eyes might fold when she spoke of a sick child. It was not a perfect mask, but it had been enough to fool the last two patrols on the road.

The warden set the vial back in the box with a small click of glass against wood and stood. He did not close the box. He left it open on the stones between them, and his hand dropped to the short sword at his hip, not drawing but resting.

"Your cousin. Her name."

"Mira. Mira Crane. In the lower wards, near the tanner's lane."

"I know the lane." He said it in a way that could have been a simple answer or a warning. "You will be watched, Dalla Crane. The Forge takes care of its own, and we do not love strangers who come with cures for our sicknesses. If your mixtures work, you will be welcome. If they do not, or if you are found in places a herbalist has no reason to be, I will ask you questions that are harder to answer."

"I understand, warden."

"I do not think you do." He stepped aside at last, and the gate was open before her, the shadow of the arch cool against her face. "But you will."

She repacked the satchel with hands that were not quite as steady as she would have liked, and she stepped through the gates of Vaelmorr, and the city took her in.

The first smell of Vaelmorr was iron.

It rose from the forges that lined the river, a hot mineral tang that clung to the throat and sat on the tongue like a coin. Beneath it came the sour undercurrent of the tanneries in the lower wards, and above that the sharper notes of woodsmoke and horse sweat and the faint sweetness of something frying in oil. The streets were narrow and the cobbles were uneven, worn into shallow bowls by centuries of boots and cart wheels, and the houses leaned together overhead so that the sky showed only in thin bright strips far above.

Elara walked with her head down and her satchel pressed close to her hip, and she did not look at the patrols.

She had been told, in a tavern three nights ago, by a woman with a missing thumb and a manner that suggested she had once been someone of consequence, that the underground resistance kept a safehouse in the Glassmaker's Quarter, above a chandler's shop, behind a door that had been painted with a blue heron. She had been told also that the chandler had been arrested in the spring, and that the door might no longer be a door at all, and that the only way to know was to knock and see who answered, or did not.

She did not go to the Glassmaker's Quarter.

The woman with the missing thumb had been drinking, and drunk informants in strange cities were, in Elara's experience, either agents provocateurs or the genuine dead. She had thanked her and left and slept that night in a barn, and in the morning she had walked the streets until she found a more reliable kind of sign.

It was small. A scrap of cloth, the color of dried blood, tied around the post of a sign that bore the painted outline of a mortar and pestle. The cloth was knotted in a particular way, a slip-knot with a single tail left hanging, and Elara had seen that knot only once before, in a book of old signals that had belonged to her father's steward.

She turned up the street, counting the posts as she went.

The apothecary was at the end of a cul-de-sac that opened into a small, sunless square. The sign above the door was green with age, the gilt lettering worn to ghosts of letters, and the window was full of dusty glass jars containing things that might once have been herbs and were now better left unexamined. The door, when she pushed it, gave a long thin creak, and the bell above it did not ring because the clapper had been removed.

The interior was dim and close. A counter ran along the far wall, and behind it were shelves, and on the shelves were more jars, and on the floor were baskets of dried roots, and from the ceiling hung bundles of things that might have been lavender and might have been something else. The air was thick with dust and the faint, papery smell of old paper and older secrets.

"Hello?" Elara said, and her voice sounded very small in the dim room. "I was told a room might be had, above the shop."

There was a sound from behind the counter, a small startled sound, like a bird flushed from a hedge, and then a face appeared, and then the rest of the face's owner.

She was young, or youngish, and she was half-elven, which in the Forge meant her ears were a little pointed and her eyes were a little too large and her hair was the color of unbleached linen and she wore it pulled back in a knot that was coming undone. Her hands were stained green at the fingertips, and there was a smudge of something dark across one cheekbone. She looked, Elara thought, like someone who had been in the middle of something and was not sure whether to be glad of the interruption or afraid of it.

"The room," the young woman said. "Yes. The room. It is, you know, it is available. I was not expecting, that is, no one comes to the door anymore, I have to say, so you startled me a little, which is a stupid thing to say, because you are a customer, or a possible lodger, and I should be glad, and I am, I am glad, I am only."

She took a breath. The bell-less silence of the shop settled back around them.

"I am Wren," she said. "Wren. Just Wren. There is no other name, or there is, but I do not use it. Do you have a name? You do not have to give it. People do not, anymore."

"Dalla Crane," Elara said. "I am a herbalist. I have come to the city because I have heard there is sickness, and I have remedies that may help."

Wren nodded. She was nodding in a way that suggested she was not sure whether to believe it.

"Upstairs," she said. "This way. Mind the second step, it is a little, that is, it gives a little. I keep meaning to fix it. I have been meaning to fix it for some time."

The second step did, in fact, give a little. Elara put her hand on the wall to steady herself, and the wall was cool and slightly damp, and somewhere in the plaster there was a faint, dry smell of chalk and something else, something bitter, something she recognized. She did not let her breath catch. She did not let her hand tighten. She let her fingers move a little on the plaster, as a woman might if she were steadying herself, and she catalogued the smell, and she filed it away.

The room was small and clean and almost entirely empty. A bed, a washstand, a chair with a woven seat, a window that looked out onto the square. The light through the window was thin and gray, and it fell on the floorboards in a single pale stripe. There was a latch on the door, and the door itself was solid, and when Elara closed it behind them and put her hand on the latch she felt the weight of it and the fit of it and she knew it would hold.

"It is not much," Wren said, from the doorway, her hands twisted together at her waist. "I do not charge much. I cannot, really, because no one has any money, and I am not, you understand, I am not trying to be cruel, I am only being honest, which my master said was a kind of cruelty in itself, but he is not here, so."

"Your master?"

"He was," Wren said. "He was my master. He taught me. He is not anymore, that is, he is not teaching, because he is, he was, he is dead. Since the spring. The patrol said it was a robbery. The patrol said many things."

She said it in a way that was almost casual, the way a person says a thing they have said so many times it has worn smooth in their mouth. Elara looked at her, and Wren looked back, and the silence between them was the kind that is not really empty at all.

"I am sorry," Elara said.

"Thank you. People are sorry. I am sorry also. I am sorry about many things. I am sorry about the step. I will fix the step. I have said I will fix the step, and I will. Someday soon. When I have a board, and a hammer, and a moment, and not a care in the world, which I do not, and will not, but still."

She smiled, briefly, and the smile did not reach her eyes, and then she was gone, and Elara was alone in the small clean room.

She set the satchel on the bed. She took off her cloak, and she folded it, and she laid it on the bed beside the satchel, and she stood for a moment with her hands at her sides and her eyes on the pale stripe of light on the floor.

Thornroot.

The smell in the plaster, the faint bitter undertone, the almost-not-there trace of it, was thornroot. Not the dried powder of the apothecary's trade, not the tincture in a bottle, but the living root itself, ground small and mixed with chalk and worked into the very bones of the wall. It was a ward. A very old ward, older than the city, older than the Forge, a ward against scrying and against seeking and against the long sight of things that should not have eyes.

Someone had warded this room. Someone had warded it well, and recently, because the smell was still strong enough to catch.

Elara sat down on the chair. She put her hands on her knees, and she let her breath go out of her in a long slow line, and she did not smile and she did not frown, and her face was very still, the way a face is still when it is doing the work of keeping itself from showing anything at all.

The half-elf had not looked at the cloak. Elara had watched her. She had not looked at the cloak, and she had not looked at the satchel, and she had not looked at Elara's hands, and she had not, above all, looked at the place where the thornroot smell was strongest. She had looked, instead, at the floor, and at the second step, and at her own stained fingers, and her face had been a careful blank that was, in its way, as practiced as Elara's own.

She knows what is in my cloak, Elara thought. She knows, and she is choosing not to know, and she is letting me choose also.

The pale stripe of light moved a little on the floor, and somewhere in the square below a child laughed, and somewhere else a hammer rang on iron, and the city went on about its business, and Elara sat very still in the small warded room above the dusty apothecary, and she began, at last, to make her plans.

The city was not the same city when she walked out into it again. The same stones lay underfoot, the same smell of hearth-smoke drifted from the cookshops, the same ragged children ran between the carts, but the air had taken on a new weight, the way a sky takes on weight before a storm that has not yet decided where to break.

Wren met her at the agreed corner, a wedge of shadow behind a stack of fish-barrels that gave back a salt-sour tang to every breath. The young woman had changed her cap for a flatter one, more workmanlike, and she had pinned her hair back so tightly it pulled at her temples, and she looked, in the grey afternoon light, like a girl pretending to be a boy pretending to be no one at all.

Elara thought the disguise was not bad. She thought it would not last an hour if the right sort of eye fell on it, but for now, in this district, it would do.

"By the Sea-Mother," Wren whispered, "you look like you swallowed a hook."

"I have decided on a course," Elara said.

Wren waited. The way she waited was a thing Elara had come to respect, that small patient stillness of a person who had learned, in the schools of loss, not to fill silence with her own noise.

"The Forge is not what we thought," Elara said. "Or it is more than we thought. There is a second group within it. There is a woman who answers to no one we have named, and who may, in fact, answer to the Iron Council itself without knowing she does so. And there is a ward on that room that is older than the city, and someone paid a great deal of thornroot to lay it within the last three days. I cannot go back inside. Not as I am. Not without preparation I do not have time to make."

Wren's face went through three small changes, the way a pond goes through three small changes when a pebble is dropped into it, and then she said, carefully, "What do you want me to do."

Elara looked at her. In the soft slatted light, the freckles on Wren's face looked like a scattering of seeds, and her eyes were the colour of new copper, and she was, Elara thought, so very young, younger in some ways than any of the girls she had been at court, because no girl at court had ever had to learn the shape of a real peril so soon.

"I want you," Elara said, "to go to the Gilded Gallows before sundown."

Wren did not flinch. That was good. That was the right response. If she had flinched, Elara would have reconsidered everything.

"And watch," Elara said. "And remember. Every face. Every word spoken by the man who reads the condemnation. Every reaction from the crowd, particularly the women, particularly the ones in the second row. And when it is done, I want you to come back to the cistern-house and I want you to tell me who in that crowd was not watching the dying, but was watching the watching."

Wren nodded once, a short, tight motion, and her hand went to the small of her back, where she carried the thin knife Elara had given her from the satchel, a touch of comfort, a touch of rehearsed readiness.

"And you?" Wren said.

"I am going to buy thread," Elara said, "and a small bottle of ink, and a paper of pins. And I am going to walk past the Burned District and see if anyone is watching the door of the apothecary. And I am going to sit in a public house and drink a small cup of something hot and let the city pass me by, because for a few hours I need to be no one at all, and because if I do not rest my mind, it will begin to eat itself."

Wren's mouth trembled, just once, at the corner. "You will not go alone to the apothecary."

"I will not go inside," Elara said. "I will pass the door. I will not stop. I will buy my thread, and I will turn my face to the wall, and I will come home."

The word came out before she could catch it. Home. The cistern-house with its low ceiling and its smell of damp stone was not home. Home was a place that no longer stood. Home was a name no one was allowed to speak.

Wren, to her credit, did not remark on the slip. She only said, "I will be back before the bell for the dead."

"Be careful," Elara said.

"I will," Wren said. "And you."

They parted at the fish-barrels, and went their separate ways into the grey afternoon, and did not look back, because looking back was a habit that got you killed in a city like this one.

The Gilded Gallows stood at the eastern edge of the market square, a tall wooden frame hung with banners of the old gold that the city had not earned in living memory, and the ropes that hung from its crossbeam were not golden at all, but the colour of old hemp, and the nooses at their ends were tied with a care that was almost tender, almost reverent, the way a fisherman ties a knot he knows will soon be tested on a heavy catch.

Elara had meant to stay away. She had meant to go to the thread-merchant and the ink-seller and the pin-woman, and to let the execution pass without her presence at it, because the dead could not be helped by her witness, and the living could not be aided by her grief, and her face in that crowd was a risk she had no right to take.

But her feet had carried her there anyway, the way feet carry a person to the place they most need not be, and she found herself at the edge of the square, three rows back from the cordon of militia, with a knot of women at her elbow and a smell of cheap tallow from a vendor's stall somewhere behind her, and the bell in the tower above the Gallows had begun to toll, one slow beat at a time, the heartbeat of a city preparing to do its duty.

The condemned was a woman. Elara could see her now, being led out from the small door at the base of the Gallows by two men in the half-armour of the city guard, and the woman was not young and she was not old, and her hair had been cut short in the rough way that prisoners' hair is cut, and her gown was a grey shift that had been worn by other prisoners before her, and her hands were tied in front of her with a length of the same old hemp that hung in the nooses above.

The crowd made a sound. It was not a roar. It was not a hush. It was a kind of communal intake, a single vast breath drawn through a thousand throats, the way a forest draws breath before a storm, and in that sound was hunger and was fear and was the deep, shameful, human need to see a thing be done that one would never do oneself.

A man stepped up onto a small platform beside the Gallows. He wore the black tabard of the city magistrate, and he carried a scroll, and when he unrolled it, his voice came out of him in the carrying, practiced, almost musical tones of a man who had done this work before and intended to do it again.

"Catha Dren, called the Witch of the Lower Loom," he read, "accused of the practice of the forbidden arts, of the making of cures against the will of the Crown, of the keeping of familiars, of the consorting with things that should not be named, and of the selling of her unclean soul to powers outside the light of the true forge. You are condemned to die by the rope, that your breath may be returned to the air, and that the city may be cleansed of your presence, and that the living may take warning from your ending."

Catha Dren, at the foot of the ladder, did not weep. She did not plead. She lifted her chin, and she looked out at the crowd, and her face was very still, the way a face is still when it has already accepted what is coming, and what came into Elara then was not pity, because pity was too small a word, but a kind of recognition, a kind of terrible sisterhood, because the woman at the foot of the ladder was not a witch, Elara knew it in her bones, Elara knew it in the way the thornroot had sung in the apothecary, Elara knew it in the way the ward on the upper room had been laid with skill and not with malice, because there are no witches in the world, there are only women who know things that powerful men would rather they did not.

The militia began to lead her up the ladder, and the crowd made its sound again, and the sound was louder now, and the children at the edges of the square were being lifted onto shoulders, and somewhere a woman was singing in a thin high voice one of the old cleansing songs, the kind that have no melody and only the rhythm of a hammer falling.

Elara looked at the faces around her. She looked, as she had told Wren to look, for the watchers who were not watching. She saw a man near the front, his face as still as a held breath. She saw a woman in the second row whose eyes did not move from the condemned but whose hands, at her sides, were shaping small signs that Elara recognised from the old books in her father's library, signs that had been dead for a hundred years, signs that meant, in the lost language of the hedge-witches, I see you, sister, and I will remember.

The noose was fitted. The magistrate finished his reading. The lever was pulled. The trap fell. The body dropped. The rope sang its brief, terrible song, and then the body hung, and swung, and was still.

The crowd exhaled. Somewhere, a cheer went up, ragged and uncertain, the kind of cheer that is not quite sure of itself, the kind of cheer that is half relief and half shame. The militia began to push the crowd back, and the body hung in the grey air, turning slowly on its rope, and a little boy near Elara asked his mother if the woman was sleeping, and his mother said no, my love, she is gone, and the boy said will she come back, and the mother said no, my love, and the boy said why not, and the mother did not answer, and the woman in the second row turned, and looked directly at Elara, and held her gaze for a long moment, and then she slipped away into the thinning crowd, and was gone.

Elara stood a moment longer. The wind shifted, and brought her the faint, sweet, unmistakable smell of thornroot from somewhere in the crowd, from a woman now lost among the others, from a sister who had come to watch and to remember and to carry the name of Catha Dren in the private keeping of her heart.

The execution was done. The city was cleansed. The living had taken warning, and the warning was a rope, and the rope was the only argument the Forge had left.

Elara turned, and walked away, and her face was very still, and her hands were steady at her sides, and her mind was already back in the warded room above the dusty apothecary, already laying the first stones of the path that would carry her past the Burned District and through the gates of Vaelmorr and into the heart of the machine that had killed the herbalist and condemned the healer and would, if she did not stop it, consume every quiet and useful thing in the world and call the consumption a cleansing.

The bell tolled on. The body swung on. The afternoon leaned toward its end, and the shadows lengthened across the square, and the Gilded Gallows held its new fruit up to the grey sky, and somewhere in the thinning crowd a woman in the second row was walking away with a small sprig of thornroot in her sleeve, and she was carrying with her, in the private keeping of her heart, the face of a stranger three rows back who had not cheered, and who had wept, and whose tears had not been for the dead but for the living, and who would, when the time came, be found again.

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