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The Bone Crown of Ardrith: The Cartographer Who Drew Wrong Lines

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Chapter 1 of 20

Ink spattered across the marble floor of the Cartographers' Hall, black droplets catching the amber light of the suspended lanterns overhead. Wren Ashenmere stood rigid before the raised dais, her knuckles white where they gripped the edges of her atlas. The parchment, three years of careful survey work and sleepless nights, lay unfurled behind her, its edges curling in the draft that moved through the vast chamber. From her position, she could see the seventh continent she had mapped sitting in the southern reaches of the empty sea, drawn in the precise cartographic notation she had been taught since her apprenticeship began. The landmass was real. She had sailed to its shores. She had walked its beaches and tasted its salt air.

The laughter of the senior cartographers filled the hall like the cawing of crows.

"Junior Ashenmere." Guildmaster Velendris spoke from the dais, his voice carrying the practiced weight of a man who had condemned many hopefuls before her. He wore robes of deep indigo, the sleeves embroidered with golden thread that depicted the six recognized continents of the known world. There was no seventh thread. "You stand before this assembly accused of forgery, fabrication, and the corruption of cartographic record. How do you answer these charges?"

Wren's jaw tightened. The taste of copper flooded her mouth, and she realized she had bitten the inside of her cheek without noticing. She could feel the eyes of every apprentice, every journeyman, every master in the hall pressing against her back. Somewhere in the gallery, her former instructor, old Tomas, would be watching. He had warned her not to submit the atlas. He had told her the Guild would never accept what she had found.

"I answer that the continent exists." Her voice came out rougher than she intended, scraped raw from weeks of argument and sleepless preparation. "I sailed aboard the merchant vessel Saltpray under Captain Brennan. I have the ship's log, signed by the first mate. I have soil samples sealed in wax. I have botanical specimens catalogued by the university herbarium. The landmass is real, Guildmaster. I mapped what I found."

Velendris lifted one hand, and a servant approached the dais carrying a rolled document. The Guildmaster accepted it with ceremonial gravity and allowed the seal to break across his thumb. The wax cracked with a sound that seemed too loud in the silent hall.

"The Mercantile Convocation has reviewed your claim," Velendris announced, his tone shifting into the formal register of official pronouncement. "Captain Brennan has been interviewed. His log, which you reference, contains no mention of any southern landfall. The university herbarium reports that your botanical specimens were submitted with provenance records that cannot be verified. The Convocation finds that no vessel of Caelford registry has sailed into the southern waters beyond the Shelving Straits in over four centuries."

Murmurs rippled through the assembly. Wren felt the blood drain from her face. Captain Brennan had confirmed her story when she had returned to port. He had toasted her discovery in the taverns along the Drowning Quarter. He had accepted payment for the charter and bragged of the adventure to anyone who would listen.

Someone had gotten to him. The realization settled into her stomach like a stone dropped into still water.

"The Guild has reviewed your atlas," Velendris continued. He descended one step from the dais, bringing himself closer to her, though still elevated. The lanterns overhead swayed gently, their brass chains creaking. "The cartographic techniques employed are competent. The projection mathematics are sound. The coastline you describe is rendered with admirable detail. This makes your transgression all the more serious. A skilled cartographer who fabricates is a greater threat than an incompetent one, for their lies carry the weight of expertise."

"I did not fabricate." Wren held her ground, though her hands had begun to tremble. "You can send a ship. You can verify the coordinates yourself. The continent sits at forty-two degrees south, in the waters the old maps call the Sunken Reach."

"The old maps call those waters cursed." Velendris spoke the word as though it tasted bitter. "The old maps also place the Floating Isles of Aerith in the northern sky, despite a century of astronomical observation proving them false. The old maps are the remnants of a superstitious age, Junior Ashenmere. This Guild has worked for three generations to correct those errors and build a true picture of the world. You would have us abandon that work because a junior cartographer claims to have sailed where no one has sailed in four hundred years?"

Wren opened her mouth to respond, but the Guildmaster raised his hand again.

"The sentence of this Guild is as follows." Velendris turned to address the assembly, his voice rising to fill every corner of the vaulted hall. "The atlas submitted by Junior Wren Ashenmere is hereby declared void and confiscated. All survey notes, logs, and supporting documentation are seized as evidence of fabrication. The junior's apprenticeship is revoked. Her name is struck from the rolls of the Guild. She is forbidden to practice cartography within the territories of Caelford under penalty of imprisonment."

The words fell like hammer blows. Wren felt each one land in her chest. Three years of work, three years of climbing the ranks from street sweeper to junior apprentice, erased in a single pronouncement. She thought of the empty seat at her family's table, the one that had remained unfilled since the Bone Queen's raiders had come to Ashenmere village. She had taken up cartography because maps were promises that places existed, that you could find them, that you could go there. That promise was now being stripped from her in front of the entire Guild.

"Furthermore," Velendris added, "the junior is to be remanded to the Custody of the Watch for a period of fourteen days, pending investigation into the source of her fabrications. Should she be found to have acted alone, she will be released with a formal censure. Should evidence emerge of conspiracy, she will face the full penalties of the Cartographic Accords, up to and including binding of the hands."

A gasp went through the assembly. Binding of the hands was a punishment reserved for the most egregious offenders, those who had falsified maps to profit from fraud or to lead ships into danger. It involved the severing of the tendons of the fingers, a permanent maiming that ensured the offender could never practice their trade again. Wren saw apprentices exchange horrified glances in the gallery.

"You cannot do this." The words were out of her mouth before she could stop them. "The continent is real. I can prove it. Send a ship, any ship, and they will find the landmass exactly where I have placed it."

Velendris regarded her with something that might have been pity in a different man. In him, it read as cold calculation.

"You have already proven your willingness to deceive, Junior Ashenmere. Your protestations merely confirm the depth of your conviction. Take her."

Two members of the Guild's internal security stepped forward from the shadows near the dais. They wore the dark blue sashes of enforcers, and their faces were professionally blank. One of them reached for Wren's arm.

She jerked away. "I want it entered into the record that I formally challenge this ruling. I want the coordinates logged. I want the names of every Guildmaster who votes to condemn me, so that when the truth emerges, history will know who tried to silence it."

Silence answered her. The lanterns overhead creaked on their chains, swaying in a draft that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere. Wren became aware of her own heartbeat, loud in her ears, and the faint sound of rain beginning to tap against the high windows of the hall. The floating city of Caelford, suspended above the misty depths of the Hollow Sea by mechanisms no living person fully understood, occasionally produced strange winds that swept through its towers and squares.

Velendris hesitated. The enforcers paused, awaiting instruction. The moment stretched.

Then a voice spoke from the gallery, rough with age but carrying a weight that silenced the murmurs instantly.

"I will second her challenge."

Every head turned toward the upper rows of seats. Wren recognized the speaker even before she saw him clearly. Master Olivarren sat in his customary position near the back of the hall, a thin figure in faded robes, his white hair falling across a face lined with decades of study. He had been one of her instructors in her first year, though he had retreated from active teaching long before her apprenticeship ended. He was Keeper of the Forgotten Archives, a position that existed in name only, since the Archives themselves had been sealed by Guild order two generations ago.

"Master Olivarren." Velendris' voice carried a note of warning. "The Archives are not relevant to these proceedings."

"On the contrary, Guildmaster." Olivarren rose from his seat, moving with the careful precision of a man whose joints no longer bent easily. "The Archives contain the original survey logs of Aldric the Voyager, who sailed the southern waters in the third age and reported landfall at coordinates remarkably similar to those Junior Ashenmere has recorded. If her atlas is a fabrication, it is a fabrication that predates her birth by four hundred years."

The hall erupted in noise. Cartographers leapt to their feet, shouting questions and objections. Velendris raised both hands for silence, his composed mask slipping for the first time into something that looked almost like fear. Wren stood frozen between the two enforcers, her mind racing. She had never heard of Aldric the Voyager. She had never been given access to the Forgotten Archives. But she knew what Olivarren's intervention meant, because she understood the politics of the Guild as well as anyone.

A formal challenge, seconded by a master cartographer, could not be dismissed by simple majority. It required a tribunal, a full review of evidence, and a vote that included the senior ranks of the Guild. It bought time. It bought legitimacy. It transformed her from a disgraced apprentice into a contested claimant whose case would be entered into the official record.

Olivarren met her eyes across the crowded hall. His gaze held something she could not immediately read, a mixture of calculation and concern that unsettled her more than the Guildmaster's condemnation had.

"This matter will be referred to the Tribunal of Coordinates," Velendris pronounced, his voice tight with controlled fury. "The junior will be held in custody pending the tribunal's convening. Master Olivarren, you will present your evidence to the assembled masters within seven days. Until such time, Junior Ashenmere remains confined to the Hall of Records under guard."

Wren opened her mouth to object to the confinement, but Olivarren gave the smallest shake of his head. She swallowed her protest. Whatever game the old scholar was playing, he knew the rules better than she did. She allowed the enforcers to take her arms and guide her from the hall, her destroyed atlas still spread across the marble floor behind her, its impossible seventh continent exposed to the gawking eyes of every witness.

The rain against the windows had grown louder, and somewhere in the heights of the floating city, a bell began to toll the hour. Wren counted the strikes as she was led through a side door and into a corridor she had never seen before, its walls lined with locked cabinets containing the Guild's most sensitive documents. The smell of old paper and dust filled her nostrils, familiar from years of work in the archives, but underlaid now with something sharper, the metallic tang of fear-sweat from the enforcers flanking her.

She had been in Caelford for three years. She had thought she understood the city, its politics, its hierarchies, the careful dance of ambition and tradition that governed every aspect of Guild life. Now she realized she had been walking through a map drawn by someone else, one where the lines she trusted turned out to mark boundaries she had never suspected.

The enforcers halted before a heavy iron door set into the corridor's end. One of them produced a key ring and selected a brass instrument that looked older than the Guild itself. The lock turned with a sound like bones shifting, and the door swung inward to reveal a small chamber lit by a single window that opened onto the rain-soaked expanse of the Hollow Sea below.

Wren was guided inside. The door closed behind her. The lock engaged with a finality that echoed in the empty room.

She stood alone in the Hall of Records, surrounded by cabinets she could not open and documents she could not read, and began to count the hours until the tribunal. Somewhere in the city above, Olivarren was walking toward the Archives he had not entered in thirty years. Somewhere, Captain Brennan was reconsidering his testimony or counting his payment for changing it. Somewhere, the continent she had mapped sat beneath an empty sky, waiting to be believed.

Wren Ashenmere pressed her forehead against the cold glass of the window and watched the rain fall into nothing, and she began to plan.

The rain intensified against the glass, each drop striking with the particular insistence of weather that meant to last. Wren stayed at the window long enough for her breath to fog the pane in slow pulses, then turned and began her examination of the chamber with the methodical attention that had once served her in herb-gardens and now served her in cells.

The Hall of Records was smaller than its name suggested. Perhaps twelve feet by fifteen, with walls lined in dark wood cabinets whose doors bore brass nameplates too tarnished to read in the fading light. A writing desk occupied one corner, its surface bare except for a brass inkwell shaped like an open eye and three quills of varying age. A single chair sat before it, its cushion still holding the impression of whoever had last occupied the seat. A narrow cot stood against the far wall, its blankets folded with the precision of someone who believed in order even in confinement.

Wren sat on the cot. She sat because standing would have suggested readiness to move, and readiness would have suggested hope, and hope in this room felt like a blade she could not afford to sharpen.

She had learned to plan in small increments. Not the grand strategies of generals or Guild masters, but the immediate tactics of survival: what could be moved, what could be traded, what could be hidden in the seams of clothing or the linings of boots. She thought of Sable, somewhere in the city, wearing the silence of the unrepresented. She thought of the Bone Queen, patient and inevitable as stone. She thought of the name she had carried into Caelford, and whether the tribunal would strip it from her the way enforcers had stripped her of her satchel.

Three hours until dawn. Four until the tribunal convened. The math of it sat in her chest like a held breath.

She rose and crossed to the writing desk. The quills were useless to her; the inkwell, when she unstoppered it, held nothing but the ghost of old pigment. But the brass eye regarded her with the blank patience of all things Guild-made, and she found in it a strange anchor.

A sound reached her then, faint and unexpected. A tapping, not at the door, but at the window.

She turned. The rain had not stopped, but at the sill, somehow defying the wind and the angle of the casement, something had come to rest. A small shape, dark against the gray morning that had begun to lighten the eastern sky.

Wren approached. The glass was cold against her fingers when she raised the latch. The casement swung outward into a gust of wet air, and the shape did not fall. It held its position with a steadiness that suggested it had been placed there by someone who understood the particular physics of this window.

A compass. Brass, worn to a dull sheen by years of handling or years of burial, its case no larger than a walnut. Its needle did not point north. It pointed, instead, toward something south of the city, toward the lower districts where the Hollow Sea lapped against the foundations of the Guild complex and, beyond that, toward the wound.

Wren felt her stomach drop, and then her hands steady themselves around the compass with the grip of someone catching a rope.

The needle pointed toward the place she had drawn on her map. The place she had crossed out. The place that should not exist according to every convention of cartography she had been taught.

She looked up. The window gave her a view of nothing but rain and the distant smudge of rooftops, the angles of Caelford rendered in water and shadow. Whoever had placed the compass was either gone or had chosen not to be seen. The sill held no footprints. The casement offered no purchase for a climber. The storm offered no cover she could trust.

She pulled the window closed. The compass sat in her palm, still warm, and she did not know why that detail frightened her more than anything else that morning.

The rain had not stopped, but the quality of the light had begun to change. Dawn was coming, slow and gray, and the tribunal would convene in four hours with or without her readiness. She had a compass that pointed toward a lie she had told the Guild, and a lie that might, if she was very careful, become the only true thing in the room.

She tucked the compass into the inner pocket of her coat, against her ribs where the warmth of her body would keep its mechanism alive. Whatever hand had placed it there had known that she would be in this room, at this window, at this hour. Had known which chamber. Had known the casement's particular weakness to wind-driven objects.

The hand had known a great deal. And the compass, with its needle still trembling toward the wound in the world, suggested that the knowing was not yet finished.

Wren returned to the cot. She did not sleep. She sat with her back against the wall and her hand pressed over the compass and she listened to the rain diminish by increments until the city began to wake around her, its bells and its wheels and its distant voices filtering through stone.

In three hours, she would walk into a chamber and face the people who decided whether her name was worth keeping. In her pocket, a compass pointed toward the only thing she had ever drawn that could not be explained away.

She began, very quietly, to plan.

The summons came at the seventh bell.

Wren heard it first in the small bones of her wrist, a tremor like a tuning fork struck against stone. Then through the door, two sharp raps, and a voice she did not recognize giving her name as if it were a summons for laundry, not judgment.

"Ashenmere. The High Cartographer will see you now."

She rose. She had not slept. The cot looked as though no one had ever lain upon it, and the pillow still held the shape the Guild had impressed into it during airing. Her coat was the same coat she had worn the night before, but she had cleaned the mud from her boots and tied her hair back with a strip of linen that did not match her collar. Small vanities, performed by hands that moved with great deliberation.

The compass rested against her ribs.

She did not take the atlas page from her sleeve. She left it where it was, folded into the lining, a thin secret next to her skin. Whatever was about to happen, the page would happen with it. She had decided this while sitting against the wall in the dark, and she had not yet found a reason to change her mind.

The corridor outside was colder than her room had been. Stone floors, high ceilings, the kind of architecture that was meant to remind visitors of their own smallness. Wren had walked this corridor twice before, once on the day of her acceptance and once on the day of her first formal review, and both times she had been too nervous to look up. Now she looked, and the vaulting was very beautiful in the way that expensive things are beautiful when you have stopped wanting them.

The attendant was a junior cartographer whose name she did not know. He walked slightly ahead of her, never beside, and his shoulders were held in the rigid posture of someone who had been told that walking with a disgraced colleague might lower his own standing. Wren did not blame him for this. The Guild had its seasons, and it was not his fault which one she had been born into.

They passed the Hall of First Renderings, where the great atlas was kept under glass and torchlight. She did not look at it. She had drawn a small portion of it herself, three years ago, a stretch of coastline that had since washed away in a storm the Guild still refused to acknowledge. Looking at it now would have felt like attending her own funeral, and she was not yet ready to mourn.

At the end of the corridor, the attendant stopped before a door of dark wood, banded with iron. He knocked, twice, in the same rhythm as before, and a voice from within said, "Send her in."

The voice was the High Cartographer's. Wren had heard it only three times in her life, and each time it had been giving instructions that the listener had no intention of disobeying. It was not a loud voice. It did not need to be loud.

The attendant opened the door and stepped aside. Wren stepped through.

The chamber was round, which she had not expected. The walls were lined with shelves, and the shelves were lined with rolled parchments, and the rolled parchments were labeled in a script she had been taught to read before she had been taught to read anything else. In the center of the room stood a table, and at the table sat a single figure, and the figure's face was turned toward a candle that was not yet lit.

"Close the door," the High Cartographer said.

Wren closed it. The sound of its closing was heavier than the door appeared to warrant, as though the air in the corridor did not wish to let her go.

"Sit."

There was a chair. Wren sat. The chair was lower than the High Cartographer's, which was the kind of detail that she suspected was not accidental. From this position, the High Cartographer appeared taller than she was, and Wren appeared shorter than she was, and the candle between them was a small sun around which their orbits had been arranged.

The High Cartographer's name was Varenne. She was not old, but she had the kind of face that made age difficult to estimate, the way some faces make beauty difficult to estimate. Her hands were precise. Her robes were the deep blue of senior office, and her collar was pinned with a silver needle that marked her as the only person in the Guild authorized to amend the great atlas without consensus.

She finished whatever she had been doing with the candle, set down the taper, and looked at Wren.

Wren looked back.

"You know why you are here," Varenne said.

"I can guess."

"Then guess."

"You believe I falsified a portion of my submission. You believe the altered coastline in the eastern margin was an act of deliberate misrepresentation. You believe I did this for reasons you have not yet determined."

"You have left out a part."

"I have left out the part where I am right."

Varenne did not blink. "You are not."

"I am."

"We have measured. We have compared. We have consulted the secondary surveys. The coastline you submitted does not exist."

"No," Wren said. "It does not exist yet."

The candle chose that moment to catch. The flame rose, wavered, and steadied, and in its light the High Cartographer's face did not change, but her hands did. They moved, slightly, the fingers drawing together as if she had begun, involuntarily, to shape a coastline of her own.

"Explain," she said.

Wren took a breath. She had rehearsed this in the dark, against the wall, while the rain diminished and her body refused to sleep. She had rehearsed it in three different versions, and she had settled on the one that was most likely to make her expelled.

"I was in the eastern margin six weeks ago. I was surveying a section of coastline that had been flagged for rechecking after the spring floods. The Guild sent me because no one else wanted the commission, and because I had a reputation for thoroughness that the Guild found useful when no one of higher standing was available."

"You were sent to verify."

"I was sent to verify. I verified. And what I found did not match the existing record."

"Explain the discrepancy."

"The existing record showed a coastline that had been there for ninety years. It showed a bay, a headland, a fishing village. It showed the village of Ashenmere."

Varenne's expression did not change, but her stillness did. Wren had been watched by Guild officials before, and she knew the difference between the stillness of attention and the stillness of listening. Varenne was now listening.

"I was the last person to leave Ashenmere before it burned," Wren said. "I was twelve. I do not remember most of that night. I remember smoke, and a sound like a drawer being opened, and then a sound like a drawer being closed. I remember that my mother put a satchel into my hands and told me to run, and that the satchel contained this."

She drew the compass from her pocket and set it on the table between them. The needle swung, once, and settled toward the east. Varenne did not look at it.

"The compass was my mother's. She was not a cartographer. She was an herbalist. She did not know what it pointed toward, only that it had always pointed, since she had been a girl, toward the same place. I did not know either. I spent fifteen years not knowing. I came to the Guild because I thought the Guild might teach me. I thought the Guild might teach me what my mother had been guarding."

"And did we?"

"No. The Guild taught me how to draw coastlines. The Guild did not teach me what my compass was for."

Varenne picked up the compass. She held it close to the candle. The needle did not waver.

"You altered a Guild record," she said. "You submitted a coastline that does not yet exist, and you did so under the seal of your apprenticeship. This is a violation of the Second Ordinance. It carries a single penalty."

"I know the penalty."

"Expulsion. Forfeiture of protected status. Removal of your family's name from the rolls. Your sister will lose her place at the infirmary school. Your brother will lose his apprentice stipend. Your family's exemption from the labor draft will be revoked. They will be reassigned within the season."

Wren's hands were very still on the table. She had known this. She had known it for six weeks. She had known it when she had sat on a clifftop in the eastern margin and looked out at a coastline that was not yet there, and had drawn it anyway, with ink that the Guild provided and a hand that her mother's compass had steadied.

"You have a choice," Varenne said. "You may bring me the altered page and destroy it here, in my presence, before the tribunal convenes. If you do this, and if you submit to a formal correction, your expulsion will be reduced to a censure. Your family's status will remain intact. You will be permitted to continue your apprenticeship under supervision, and the altered record will be expunged."

"And if I do not bring it?"

"Then the tribunal will convene. The page will be entered into evidence. The Second Ordinance will be applied. And the consequences I have named will fall, not only upon you, but upon every member of your household whose name appears on the rolls."

The candle burned. The needle pointed. Wren thought of her sister's hands, which were clever and gentle, and of her brother's back, which was already stooped from years of carrying heavier things than he should have had to carry. She thought of her mother, who had been dead for fifteen years and whose compass was the only inheritance that had ever made any sense to her.

"I have a question," Wren said.

"You may ask it."

"The coastline I drew. The one that does not yet exist. What did the secondary surveys show?"

Varenne set the compass down. The needle swung, and settled, and did not change its mind.

"The secondary surveys," she said, carefully, "showed a coastline that did not match the existing record. The bay was in a different location. The headland was narrower. The village was not there."

"And where was the village?"

Varenne did not answer. Wren watched her hands, which were still drawing coastlines in the air, involuntarily, as if the map had got into her fingers and would not come out.

"Where was the village, High Cartographer?"

"In the location you drew it."

The candle guttered. The compass pointed east. Wren reached into her sleeve, and drew out the folded page, and set it on the table between them, beside the compass, where the needle's shadow and the parchment's edge made a small geometry that neither of them had drawn.

"You have a choice," Wren said. "You can destroy this page, and you can go on believing that the Guild's records are complete, and you can expel me, and my sister will lose her place, and my brother will lose his stipend, and my family will be removed from the rolls. And the coastline I drew will come into being anyway, because it is already on its way, because the bone ships are already moving, because the Bone Queen is already answering a summons that no one in this Guild has been willing to hear."

She leaned forward, slightly, in the low chair.

"Or you can keep this page. And you can call the tribunal. And you can tell them what the secondary surveys showed. And you can decide, in front of them, whether the Guild is in the business of recording what is, or whether it is in the business of recording what was, until what is arrives and finds no place prepared for it."

Varenne's hands had stopped moving. Her face, in the candlelight, was the face of a woman who had just been told that the ground she had been standing on was not the ground she had thought it was, and that the ground she had thought it was had already begun to move.

"You understand," she said, "that if I keep this page, and if I convene the tribunal, and if I enter this into the record, the Guild will be forced to act upon it. The Council will be notified. The eastern garrisons will be reinforced. The Bone Queen's advance will be met with something other than denial."

"Yes."

"You understand that you may be expelled anyway, for having submitted a record you could not prove."

"Yes."

"You understand that your family will suffer regardless of the outcome."

"Yes."

Varenne looked at the page. She looked at the compass. She looked at Wren, who was sitting in a low chair in a round room, who had not slept, who had cleaned the mud from her boots and tied her hair with a strip of linen that did not match her collar, and whose hand was resting, very lightly, on the folded parchment.

"I have one more question," Varenne said.

"You may ask it."

"The compass. Your mother's. Do you know now what it points toward?"

Wren looked at the needle, which was pointing east, toward a coastline that was not yet there, toward a place where the bone ships would land and the Bone Queen's forces would come ashore, unless the Guild decided, in the next four hours, that the Guild was still capable of drawing the line between what is and what is coming.

"It points toward the truth," Wren said. "It always did. My mother just didn't know which one."

Varenne reached for the candle. She did not snuff it. She carried it, still burning, to the door of the round chamber, and she opened the door, and she called, in a voice that did not need to be loud, for the attendant to summon the tribunal to convene early.

The bells began to ring. Wren sat in the low chair, with the compass in her pocket and the page on the table and the sound of the Guild waking to its own belated knowledge filtering through stone. Outside, the rain had stopped. The first true light of morning was coming through the high windows, and it fell, very gently, on the parchment, where a coastline she had drawn was waiting, patiently, to become real.

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