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The Hollow Season: What The River Took

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Chapter 1 of 20

The call came at eleven minutes past four in the morning, slicing through the thin wall of sleep Maren Holloway had been cultivating for nearly six weeks.

She sat up in the unfamiliar bed of her rented room above the hardware store on Vesper Street, and for a long moment she did not move. The telephone on the nightstand rattled against its cradle, a hollow wooden sound that reminded her of the old school bell at Blackfern Elementary, the one her grandfather had been so proud of restoring. She had not thought about that bell in eleven years. She had not thought about her grandfather in eleven years.

The ringing stopped.

Maren swung her legs over the edge of the bed. Her bare feet met the floorboards, and she noticed how cold the wood was, how the chill climbed her ankles and held there. She had forgotten that about this place. The cold did not pass through you in Blackfern. It waited in the boards and the plaster and the window glass, patient as a creditor.

The telephone rang again. A different sound this time, more insistent, a series of short bursts that someone at the other end of the line meant as urgent. She picked up the receiver, and before she could speak, a voice she had not heard in over a decade filled her ear.

"Maren." Sheriff Dory Pennebaker's gravel came through the wire like stones tumbling in a dry creek bed. "That you?"

"It is." She did not soften the words. She had learned, after years of interviews and sources who tried to use her, that you gave men like Pennebaker exactly what they asked for and no more. "Who's speaking?"

A sound at the other end. Not quite a laugh. "Now that's a question." A pause. Pennebaker's voice settled lower, the way water finds a deeper channel. "Otis Brake. Found him in the creek behind the old Brake place. Bout an hour ago. Bound at the wrists with something."

Maren stood. The floorboards creaked beneath her, a sound she had once known so well it had been a kind of music, the song of a house settling at night, of a structure holding its shape against the weight of years and weather. Now the creaking sounded like complaint.

"What kind of something?" she asked.

"Piano wire." The sheriff's voice was careful now, the drawl drawn tight as a fiddle string. "Antique wire, looks like. The kind they used to use for tuning, before the new machines came in."

Maren did not speak for a long moment. She walked to the window, still holding the receiver, and looked out at the street. The lamp above the hardware store entrance cast a pale circle on the wet pavement. Rain had come through earlier in the night and gone, leaving the town smelling of wet iron and old pine resin. Beyond the circle of light, the street fell away into darkness that felt thicker than it should have, as though the buildings were holding their breath.

"How long has he been down?" she asked.

"Hard to say." The sheriff's tone carried the careful weight of a man who understood that what he said next would have consequences. "He's cold. The coroner will have to give us the proper reading. But I'd guess since yesterday evening, maybe earlier."

Maren let out a breath. She felt it leave her chest like something being unwound.

"Does Cora know?" she asked. "His aunt."

"No." The word came out flat. "She's up at the cabin. She doesn't come down much anymore, you know that. I was hoping someone could tell her something soft, before I have to go up there official-like."

The words sat between them, heavy and strange.

"You want me to tell her."

"I want you to come with me," Pennebaker said. "You're the only one from outside she's likely to let through the gate. And you've got the look of someone who can sit with a woman in mourning without making it worse."

Maren almost smiled at that. It was the closest the old sheriff had ever come to a compliment, as far as she could remember.

"I'll be ready in twenty minutes," she said.

"The deputy's bringing the truck around to the front of the hardware. Maren."

"Yes."

"There's something else." His voice had dropped, the way a man speaks when he is aware of being overheard by walls or woods or both. "When we pulled him out, there was a thing in his hand. A piece of paper, folded up small. I put it in a bag, but I haven't opened it. Figured you might want to see it first."

Maren felt the floor shift beneath her, the way a deck shifts on a river when the current changes direction without warning. She pressed her palm flat against the cold windowpane, and the chill climbed her wrist.

"What does it say?" she asked.

"I told you. I haven't opened it."

The line hummed between them. Somewhere outside, a dog barked once and then fell silent.

"Twenty minutes," Maren said again, and she hung up before he could say anything else.

She dressed in the dark, pulling on trousers and a wool sweater that smelled faintly of cedar and mothballs, the particular scent of clothes that had been stored and forgotten. She found her boots by the door, pulled them on without untying the laces, and laced them tight with fingers that worked by memory. Her hands were steady. That surprised her. She had expected them to shake.

The staircase down from the rented room was narrow and steep, the treads worn in the center by decades of feet that had come up and gone down with their various errands and secrets. She descended slowly, one hand on the banister, the other trailing along the wall, feeling the old wallpaper with its pattern of tiny roses that had gone gray with dust and time. At the bottom of the stairs, she paused in the small vestibule where the smell of cedar and old paper gave way to the sharper scent of machine oil and brass fittings.

The deputy was waiting outside.

He stood by the truck, a young man she did not recognize, with the broad shoulders and quiet eyes of someone who had grown up in these parts and learned early not to ask too many questions. He tipped his head to her as she came out, and she tipped hers back, and that was the whole of their introduction.

The truck was a Ford from the early seventies, painted a color that might once have been red but had faded to something closer to dried blood. The bench seat was cracked, and when Maren climbed in beside the deputy, the springs complained beneath her weight. He turned the key, and the engine turned over with a shudder and a complaint, and then they were moving, the headlamps cutting pale tunnels through the dark streets of Blackfern.

The town was quiet at this hour. The only sound besides the engine was the occasional bark of a dog, or the soft complaint of a shutter against a window frame. They passed the darkened windows of the cafe where she had eaten her supper the night before, and the post office, and the squat stone building that housed the town clerk's office, and the church with its square white steeple standing watch over the empty square.

Beyond the square, the road narrowed and began to climb. The headlamps swept across the trunks of hardwood trees, their bare branches reaching over the road like the fingers of old women. The smell of the woods came in through the vents, damp and loamy, the scent of leaves breaking down into the dark soil beneath.

The deputy drove without speaking, and Maren was grateful for that. She watched the road unwind before them, pale and serpentine, and she felt the distance between herself and the town grow in a way that had nothing to do with miles.

She had not been back to Blackfern in eleven years. She had not been back since the summer her grandfather died and her mother sent her away to live with an aunt in Charleston, and she had not been back since the summer the Conarium burned, though that was not something anyone talked about, and certainly not something anyone talked about to her.

The truck crested a low ridge, and the trees fell away on the passenger side, opening a view down into the Blackfern Valley. The river ran through the bottom of it, a pale ribbon that caught the distant moonlight and threw it back in fragments. On the far side of the river, set back into the trees, she could see the dim shape of the Brake cabin, its chimney standing against the sky like a finger pointed at something unseen.

The deputy slowed the truck and turned off the main road onto a track that led down toward the cabin. The ruts in the track were deep, and the truck rocked from side to side as they descended. Through the windshield, Maren could see the dark shape of the creek below, and beyond it, the place where they had pulled Otis Brake from the water.

She had known Otis Brake. Not well, but enough. He had been a few years behind her in school, a quiet boy with a gentle way about him, the kind of boy who helped old ladies across the street and never said anything cruel about anyone. He had been a blacksmith, like his father before him, and a part-time deputy, like his uncle on his mother's side. He had been the kind of man who was useful in a small town, the kind of man everyone relied upon for the small things that held a place together.

He had been the kind of man who did not deserve to be found in a creek with his wrists bound in antique piano wire.

The truck stopped beside a cluster of police vehicles, their lights turning slowly in the dark. Maren climbed out and stood for a moment, letting her eyes adjust. The air was colder here than in town, and it carried a different smell. The smell of the river. The smell of mud and rotting leaves and something else beneath it, something mineral and faint, like the smell of an old key turned in a lock that had not been opened in a long time.

Sheriff Pennebaker came toward her out of the dark, his boots heavy on the grass. He had aged in the years since she had seen him last. His hair had gone almost completely white, and the lines in his face had deepened into something that looked less like wrinkles and more like the grooves in a piece of worn wood. But his eyes were the same, dark and patient, the eyes of a man who had learned to wait out storms.

"You came," he said.

"You called."

He nodded once, as if that explained everything, and led her toward the place where they had laid Otis Brake's body on the bank of the creek. A sheet covered him from the chest down. His face was turned toward the water, his eyes closed. His wrists, laid across his chest, were bound with loops of dark wire that caught the turning lights and threw them back in small flashes.

Maren knelt beside the body. The ground was cold beneath her knees, and she could feel the chill climbing through the fabric of her trousers. She did not touch the body. She looked at the wire.

It was old wire. The kind you saw in museums sometimes, wound on wooden spools behind glass. It had a dull shine to it, the shine of metal that had been polished once and then left to age in the dark. The loops around Otis Brake's wrists were tight but careful, tied with a kind of precision that spoke of patience and practice.

She stood up slowly and looked at the sheriff.

"The paper," she said.

He reached into the pocket of his coat and brought out a clear plastic bag. Inside it, folded small, was a square of paper that had gone soft with water. He handed it to her without a word.

She turned the bag over in her hands, feeling the weight of it, the way the wet paper inside clung to the plastic. She did not open it. She looked up at the sheriff.

"In front of the deputy?"

"He knows when not to see," Pennebaker said, with a glance toward the young man, who had moved to the far side of one of the police cars and was studying the trees as though they held the answers to questions he had not yet thought to ask.

Maren broke the seal on the bag and drew out the paper. It came apart in her hands, soft as cloth. The ink had run in places, but she could still read the words, written in a careful hand she had not seen in eleven years.

She read them once. She read them twice. She folded the paper and put it back into the bag and sealed it again.

"Well?" the sheriff asked.

Maren looked at him for a long moment. The turning lights passed over his face, lighting one side and then the other, and she saw something in his expression she had not seen before, something that looked almost like fear.

"We need to talk to Cora," she said.

The sheriff nodded once, as though he had expected that answer, and turned toward the truck. The deputy came out from behind the police car, his eyes careful and distant, and the three of them climbed into the cab and began the slow climb up the track toward the Brake cabin.

The headlights swept the trees as they went. Somewhere up ahead, in a cabin set back into the dark, an old woman waited without knowing what the river had brought to her door.

The cabin sat at the end of a lane that the county had forgotten decades ago. Ruts filled with rainwater ran between banks of red clay, and the trees pressed close on both sides, their branches meeting overhead in places to form a tunnel of leaves that the truck's headlights could not fully illuminate. Brake had lived here alone since his wife died. The county records Maren had pulled before driving in said as much: Everett Brake, widower, one adult child, Cora Brake, listed at the same address.

Otis Brake met them at the door. He was a lean man in his forties with the look of someone who had spent too many years breathing coal smoke and forge heat. His hands were scarred in patterns that told their own story, the knuckles thickened, the fingers slightly bent. He held the door open with one of those hands and looked past the sheriff, past the deputy, and settled his gaze on Maren with an expression that held neither suspicion nor welcome, only the careful neutrality of a man who had learned to wait before reacting.

"She ain't slept," he said. "She been up since we found the truck."

Maren stepped past him into the cabin. The interior smelled of wood smoke and dried sage and something sweeter underneath, like apples left too long in a bowl. A single lamp burned on a table near the fireplace, and in its yellow light an old woman sat in a straight-backed chair with a blanket across her knees and a cup of tea gone cold in her hands.

Cora Brake was smaller than Maren remembered, or perhaps Maren had been younger when she had last seen her, which was true. She had been twenty then and Cora had been perhaps sixty, and the years between had done their usual work, thinning the flesh, sharpening the bones beneath the skin, pulling the corners of the mouth into lines that suggested either patience or resignation. Her eyes were clear and very dark, and they found Maren in the doorway without any of the confusion that might have been expected in a woman who had just learned that her brother was dead.

"You came back," Cora said.

"I had to," Maren said.

Cora looked at the sheriff, who had stopped just inside the door, his hat in his hands now, his bulk seeming to fill the small room in a way that had nothing to do with his actual size. She looked at Otis, who had come to stand near the fireplace with his arms folded. She looked at the deputy, who had remained on the porch.

"Sit down, Maren Holloway," Cora said. "You too, Dory. Otis, fetch another chair from the back room."

Otis went. The sheriff did not sit until Cora had given him permission to do so, which Maren noted. The chair he found was a low one, and he settled into it with a grunt that suggested his knees were not what they had been. Maren sat on a wooden stool near the door, the only seat left, and the four of them formed a rough square around the cold hearth.

"I have to ask you some questions," Maren said. "I am sorry about the timing of them."

"Don't be sorry," Cora said. "Everett was seventy-one years old and he'd been dying of one thing or another for the last ten. If it wasn't the river it'd be his heart, and if it wasn't his heart it'd be the creek at the bottom of the holler that floods every spring. I've been making peace with the order of his leaving for longer than you have."

Maren looked at her for a moment, then opened the plastic bag and drew out the folded paper. She held it carefully, by the edges, and the sheriff shifted in his chair but did not speak.

"Have you seen this letter before?" Maren asked.

Cora took the letter in both hands. Her fingers were steady, though the skin across the knuckles was thin as onionskin. She unfolded the paper and studied it for a long time, her lips moving slightly as she read, and then she folded it again and handed it back.

"I have not," she said. "But I know the hand. Everett learned his letters from our mother, and she learned hers from hers. Every Brake writes the same way. You could put three of us in a row and a stranger couldn't tell which was which."

Maren took the letter back and sealed it in the bag. "Did your brother write letters often?"

"Never," Cora said. "Everett Brake was not a man who put pen to paper. He called me on the phone or he drove over or he didn't talk to me at all. He'd sooner cut his own tongue out than sit down and write somebody a letter."

"So this letter," Maren said. "Did he mention to you he was writing to anyone?"

"He did not," Cora said. "And I would have remembered, because I would have told him he was being foolish. Everett was not a fool about most things, but he was a fool about certain kinds of trouble, and writing letters he didn't need to write was one of them."

The sheriff cleared his throat. "Cora, you understand that what we say in this room might have to be repeated."

"I understand that, Dory Pennebaker," Cora said. "I have lived in this county longer than you have been sheriff. I know how a room works."

Pennebaker inclined his head, a small bow of acknowledgment, and said nothing more.

Maren leaned forward on the stool. "Cora, the letter is addressed to someone called the Architect. Do you know who that is?"

Something moved behind Cora's eyes. It was not surprise exactly. It was the kind of stillness that comes over a person when they have heard a name they had hoped never to hear again. Maren had seen that stillness in the faces of men she had interviewed in other places, in other years, and she knew it was not a thing to be pressed. She waited.

"The Architect," Cora said, as though tasting the word. "That's what they called him when I was a girl. Nobody used the name. If you had to speak of him at all, and most people didn't, you said 'the Architect' and you said it quiet, the way you'd say 'the Devil' if you meant something more specific than the Devil."

"Who was he?" Maren asked.

"He was a man," Cora said. "Or he was something that passed for a man. He came through here in the winter of 1959, when the river froze so solid you could walk across it, and he stayed at the old Hadley place for three months. He drew plans. He talked to people about drainage and soil and the way the water moved under the ground. He was working on something, but nobody ever saw what it was, and when the ice broke up he left and the Hadley place burned to the ground that same spring, and nobody ever talked about the Architect again except in pieces, and never where the children could hear."

Cora paused and picked up her cold tea and looked into it as though she might read something in the leaves. She set it down again without drinking.

"Everett was a boy then," she said. "He would have been eight, nine years old. He remembered things I didn't. He went with the Architect one day, down by the river. He never told me what they did. He never told anyone what they did. But he came back different. Quieter. The kind of quiet that lives in a body for sixty years."

Maren looked at the sheriff. The sheriff was looking at the floor. She looked at Otis, who was standing very still by the fireplace with his arms folded and his face unreadable.

"Does the Architect have another name?" Maren asked.

"Some say he was a Roth," Cora said. "Some say he wasn't. There was a Della Roth lived in the hollow back then, married to a man named Pernell Fyffe, and Pernell was the one who first brought the Architect up from Lexington. But Della wouldn't talk about him and Pernell was dead before the ice went out, drowned in the river under circumstances nobody could agree on, and after that the Architect was just a story people told when they wanted to scare each other."

The deputy appeared in the doorway, his face gray in the lamplight. "Sheriff? You ought to step out here."

Pennebaker rose. Otis went with him, and the three of them stood on the porch for a moment, voices low, and then the sheriff came back inside with a look on his face that Maren did not like.

"There's a light down at the river," he said. "Looks like somebody's set up a lantern on the bank where we found the truck." He paused. "And there's a second truck parked up the road a piece, engine still warm."

Cora set her cup down with a small click against the table. "Who'd be down there at this hour?"

"I don't know," the sheriff said. "But I'm going to find out."

"I'll come with you," Maren said.

"No," Pennebaker said. "You stay here with Cora. Otis will stay too. I don't want her alone if somebody's come up the holler with business that isn't theirs."

Maren looked at Cora. Cora looked back at her with those clear, dark eyes that seemed to take in everything and give back very little.

"Ask them what they want," Cora said. "Whoever it is. Ask them what they want, and watch their hands when they answer."

The sheriff put his hat back on and went out the door, and they heard his boots on the porch and then on the gravel, and then the police engine turned over and the lights swept the lane and faded. The cabin settled into a silence broken only by the lamp flame and the small sounds the old house made as it cooled toward morning.

Cora did not speak for a long time. She sat with her hands folded on the blanket across her knees, and Maren sat on the stool, and Otis stood by the fireplace, and the three of them listened to the dark as though they expected it to speak first.

"He was writing to him," Cora said at last. "All those years. He was writing to him, and he never told me."

"Who do you think he was writing to?" Maren asked.

"I think you know," Cora said. "I think you came up this holler because you know, and you came to my door because you wanted to hear me say it out loud."

Maren said nothing.

"The river took my brother," Cora said. "Or the river was made to take him. There is a difference, and you know it as well as I do."

Outside, somewhere down the slope, a light moved along the bank of the river. It went slowly, as though the person carrying it was being careful, or as though the person carrying it wanted to be seen. Then it went out, all at once, and the dark came back thicker than before.

Otis uncrossed his arms. "Aunt Cora," he said. "What do we do now?"

Cora looked at Maren Holloway, and Maren looked back, and neither of them answered, because the answer was not yet a thing that could be spoken aloud.

The lantern on the table began to gutter as though something in the room had used up the air. Cora reached for the wick with fingers that did not tremble, turned the brass collar a quarter turn, and the flame steadied into a small, steady pillar of gold.

"We wait," she said. "We wait until morning, and then we see what the morning shows us."

Otis pulled the curtain back from the front window and looked out into the dark. The lane was empty. The porch was empty. Somewhere down the slope a dog barked once, and then was silent as though it had been told to be.

"Aunt Cora," he said, not turning from the window. "What if Pernell comes back tonight?"

"Then we answer the door," Cora said. "And we ask him why."

Otis nodded slowly. He drew the curtain closed again and crossed the room to the fireplace and put another split of oak on the coals. The wood took fire reluctantly, then caught with a sound like a whispered word. He sat on the hearthstone, his hands loose between his knees, and watched the new flame climb the bark.

Maren had not moved from the stool. She had been listening to the silence the way she had once listened to the silence of a courtroom gallery before a verdict was read, counting the small shifts in temperature, the small changes in the quality of the light. She looked at Cora now, and what she saw in the old woman's face was not the sharp-tongued herbalist who had opened the door two hours ago. What she saw was someone who had been carrying a weight for a very long time and had only just set it down.

"You wrote to him too," Maren said. It was not a question.

Cora looked up. The lamp flame was reflected in the glass of her eyes, two small steady lights.

"Every week for eleven years," she said. "I never sent them. I kept them in a tin under the floorboard. I told myself I was waiting for the right time. I told myself a great many things."

"Why didn't you send them?"

"Because I was afraid of what he would say when he wrote back. Because I was afraid he would say nothing. Because I was afraid that if I opened that door, I would have to walk through it, and I had spent a very long time learning how to live in this house without him, and I was not sure I could learn a different way."

Otis looked at his aunt, and his face did something that Maren could not read but that the room understood.

"And now?" Maren asked.

"Now," Cora said, and her voice was very quiet, "now I wish I had sent them. Now I wish I had not been such a careful woman."

The lamp flame steadied. The fire crackled. Outside, the dark continued to press against the windows, and the lantern on the bank of the river did not come back.

Otis stood up. He went to the door and bolted it, and then he went to the back door and bolted that too, and then he came back to the hearth and sat down again. He did not say what he was thinking, but his hands were no longer loose. They were closed around the small iron rod he kept in his pocket for prying open stubborn clasps, and he held it the way his uncle had taught him to hold a tool that did not want to be used.

Maren watched him for a moment, and then she turned back to Cora.

"There is a photograph," she said. "I have been carrying it for ten years, and I have never shown it to anyone. It is the reason I came back. It is the reason I came up this holler."

Cora looked at her steadily.

"You do not have to show it to me tonight," she said.

"I think I do," Maren said.

She reached into the inside pocket of the coat she had not taken off since she had come up the lane, and she drew out a small envelope, and she set it on the table between the lamp and the tin of tobacco. The envelope was not sealed. It had been opened and closed so many times that the flap no longer adhered.

She slid the photograph out and laid it flat on the wood.

The lamp flame did not waver. The fire did not change. The room continued to be a room in which three people sat together and looked at a thing that could not be unseen.

The photograph was old. The edges were soft with handling. It had been taken at the bend in the river where the sycamore stood, on a morning when the light came in flat from the east and the water was the color of hammered tin. In the foreground a young man stood with his sleeves rolled to the elbow and his hands loose at his sides. His hair was dark and his mouth was set in the way of a man who had been told to hold still and did not see why he should. Behind him, at the edge of the frame, a second man stood half turned away, as though he had been about to step out of the picture when the shutter fell.

The second man was Pernell Fyffe.

The first man was a stranger, and the stranger was looking directly into the lens of the camera with an expression that Maren had studied for ten years and had never been able to name.

"I found this in the files at the Sentinel," she said. "It was misfiled under the wrong year. I almost threw it out. I did not throw it out."

"Who is he?" Otis asked.

"I don't know," Maren said. "I have spent ten years trying to find out. He is not in the county records. He is not in the state records. He is not in any of the yearbooks. The only place his face appears is in this one photograph, and in this one photograph he is standing beside Pernell Fyffe on the morning before my brother went into the river."

Cora reached out and touched the edge of the photograph with one finger, very lightly, as though she were afraid it might disappear.

"The man Pernell was writing to," she said.

"Or the man Pernell was warned by," Maren said. "Or the man Pernell was sent to bring home. I do not know which."

Otis looked at the photograph for a long time. Then he looked up at his aunt, and what he saw in her face was something that he had seen only once before, on the morning they had pulled his uncle's body from the bend.

"He is not from here," Otis said.

"No," Maren said. "He is not from here."

The fire settled on the hearth with a small sigh of ash. The lamp flame held steady. Somewhere outside a bird stirred in the eaves of the porch and then was still.

Cora folded the photograph carefully and set it back in the envelope, and she slid the envelope across the table to Maren.

"Keep it," she said. "I have seen enough of Pernell's writing for one night."

Maren put the envelope back into the inside pocket of her coat, and the coat settled over it the way a hand settles over a wound.

"What do we do now?" Otis asked. It was the same question he had asked an hour ago, and this time the room answered.

"We wait for morning," Cora said. "And in the morning we go up to the bend and we look at the sycamore and we see what the river has been keeping for us."

"And if Pernell is there?"

"Then we ask him," Cora said. "And we do not leave until he has answered."

Otis looked at the fire. The new split had burned down to a cradle of white ash, and the coals beneath it glowed like the eyes of something patient and old.

"I will be there," he said.

"I know you will," Cora said.

The lamp burned. The fire burned. The dark pressed against the windows. Maren Holloway sat on the stool with her hands in her lap and her brother's photograph against her ribs, and for the first time in ten years she felt as though she had set something down in a place where it would be watched.

The cabin settled. The old wood ticked once in the cooling air. The lamp flame held.

Outside, the river ran on in the dark, and what it had taken it kept, and what it had kept it would, in the morning, be made to give back.

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