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The Crown of Hollow Stars: Fire in The Hollow Hills

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Chapter 3 of 20

The first torch appeared on the ridge above the Whispering Marsh, a single point of orange trembling against the bruise-colored sky. Pim counted his breaths, waiting for the second.

It came. Then a third. Then a dozen, blooming across the ridgeline like a row of late fireflies, except fireflies did not move in formation, and these did. They slid down the slope in a long, patient line, and the marsh gas caught their light and gave it back as a sickly green halo around every rider.

"They're here," Pim said.

His voice came out smaller than he wanted. He was crouched on the narrow ledge outside the archive tower's upper window, his knees drawn up, his fingers white-knuckled on the stone. Beside him, Sera Voss did not move. She stood with her palms flat against the windowsill, her face lit from below by the guttering candle on the desk behind her, and she watched the ridgeline with the same stillness she gave to a difficult line of star charts.

"Three nights," she murmured. "Three nights, and they've come."

Pim swallowed. The marsh wind carried the smell of stagnant water and something sharper beneath it, iron and old smoke, though the fires had not yet started in the town below. He could see the rooftops of Thornbury's outer ring from here, the thatch and timber and the hanging signs of the tanner's row, all of it pale and sleeping. The bells in the market tower had not rung. No one down there knew yet.

The riders reached the bottom of the slope and fanned out. Pim made himself count them, the way Master Dunmore had taught him, because counting kept the fear from running loose in his chest. Forty. Sixty. More than a hundred. The gray cloaks they wore were torn at the hems and threaded with black at the shoulders, and when the wind shifted he caught the glint of pale metal at their throats. Hollow Court steel. The tattered gray of a kingdom that should have stayed buried.

"We need to ring the bell," Pim said. "Sera. We need to ring the market bell."

"The bell is two streets down," she said. Her voice was calm, but her fingers had pressed hard enough into the stone that the tips had gone white. "If you go now, they'll see you."

"They're going to see everyone when they hit the wall."

She turned her head, just slightly, and he saw the quick calculation behind her eyes. Sera thought in maps and angles, in lines of sight and the geometry of escape. She had been doing it since she was his age, only she did it with ink and vellum instead of with her feet on the cobbles.

"The eastern postern," she said. "Behind the tanner's. The one with the broken hinge."

"I know which one. I've run past it a thousand times."

"Then go. Fast. Don't stop for anything." She reached down and pressed something into his hand. A small glass vial, warm from her grip. "If they corner you, throw it at their feet and run the other way. Silver Order flash-powder. It will blind them for a count of ten."

Pim closed his fingers around it. The glass was cold against his palm, colder than the wind. He looked at her, and something in his throat went tight. She was going to stay up here. She was going to keep watching, the way she watched the stars, as if the answers were written in the burning of the town below.

"Come with me," he said.

"I have to see where they hit first. If they go for the gatehouse, the town loses its water. If they go for the granary, the town loses the winter." Her jaw set. "Someone has to count."

"I'll count from the street."

"You'll count and you'll hide. You're twelve, Pim. You're not a soldier."

"I'm fast," he said, "and I know these lanes better than any soldier ever will. That's nowt but truth."

He swung his legs over the ledge before she could answer and dropped to the lower roof. His boots slid on the mossy tile. He caught himself, balanced, and ran.

The streets of Thornbury's outer ring were narrow and smelled of wood-smoke and pig. Pim knew them the way he knew the lines of his own palm, every chipped step and every hanging sign that dipped low enough to duck under. He moved through them now without sound, his shoulders brushing the walls, the vial clutched in his fist. Behind him, above, he heard the first of the raiders strike the wooden palisade at the western edge. A heavy thud, then another, then a sound like a giant tearing a sheet.

The first house went up in flame before he reached the tanner's yard.

He saw it in his periphery, a sudden blooming of orange against the dark, and the heat of it reached him even from a street away. A woman screamed. A dog began to bark, then stopped. Pim did not stop. He ran.

At the corner of the tanner's row he pressed himself into a doorway and looked back. The raiders had come over the low wall in a silent, patient flood. They moved like men who had done this many times before, their pale eyes catching the firelight and giving it back as something cold and flat. They did not shout. They did not cheer. They carried short swords and long knives, and the gray cloaks hung from their shoulders like the wings of roosting bats.

Pim counted them again. He had to keep counting.

He reached the postern gate and found it, as Sera had said, broken at the hinge. He slipped through into the lane beyond and saw the market square, and the market square was already filling with people. They came in their nightclothes, some of them, and some in nothing at all, carrying children and wooden boxes and whatever they had thought to grab from their tables. They were streaming toward the inner ring, toward the stone wall that the town had spent three generations raising against exactly this.

The bell tower stood at the square's center. Pim ran for it.

He took the stairs three at a time, his thin legs burning, and at the top he found the rope already swinging. Someone had got there before him. He looked up and saw Caelan Durren hauling on the rope with both hands, his dark hair falling into his face, his jaw set in the way that meant he would not stop until the bell rang or his arms broke.

"Caelan!" Pim shouted.

Caelan looked down.

Caelan looked down at him from the bell rope. His face was white, his shirt dark with sweat, and his hands on the rope were beginning to bleed where the fibers had worn through the skin of his palms. He did not smile.

"Get up here," he said. "And hold the rope."

Pim climbed. The bell was louder at the top, a physical weight that filled his skull and rang in his teeth. He took the rope from Caelan and hauled, and the bell rang, and the town stirred below them like a kicked hive.

"Where's Sera?" Pim shouted, when he had breath.

"She's at the inn."

"Why?"

Caelan's jaw tightened. "Because Brother Aldric saw you running toward the inn an hour ago. He sent her to find you."

Pim hauled harder. The rope fibers bit into his palms. "I haven't run toward the inn."

"No." Caelan was watching the southern road now, and his voice had an edge to it that Pim did not like. "But the inn is burning. And if Sera thinks you are in it, she will go in after you."

Pim dropped the rope.

He did not remember the stairs. He only remembered the sound of his own boots on the stone, and the cold air that hit him when he burst out into the square, and the way the smoke leaned against his face like a hot hand. The square was a confusion of shouting and bucket chains and the lowing of cattle that someone had driven into the open. Master Dunmore's voice cracked out somewhere to his left, calling for the well rope. Pim ran past him without stopping.

The lane to the inn was narrow and full of fallen thatch. The heat met him three houses away. He felt it on his cheeks first, then on the backs of his hands, then in his lungs when he breathed. The White Hart stood at the end of the lane, its upper story already gone, the roof timbers burning through like the ribs of some great beast. The sign still swung on its bracket, the painted hart flaking into the smoke.

Sera was nowhere.

"Sera!" Pim shouted, and his voice came back to him flattened and small.

He ran inside.

The common room was a pit of blackened air and fallen plaster. A rafter had come down across the middle of it, and around the rafter the fire had climbed the wall in a slow, patient sheet. Pim ducked under the lintel and felt the heat roll over his scalp. He called her name again. Something moved in the corner, and he spun toward it, but it was only a chair tipping over in a draft.

Then the second rafter fell.

He did not see it. He felt it. A weight on his shoulders and across his back that drove the air out of him and pinned him to the floor with one leg twisted beneath him. The pain came a moment later, white and enormous, and he opened his mouth to scream and swallowed smoke instead. The rafter was oak and old and heavy, and it lay across him from his left shoulder to his right hip, and he could not move. He could not breathe. He tried to call out and the call came out as a wheeze.

The fire was coming closer.

He heard her before he saw her. A crash of stone from somewhere above him, and then Sera's voice, raw and desperate, calling his name. He tried to answer. He could not. He heard her drop into the room. He heard her stumble. He heard her crawling across the broken floor toward him, and he thought, with a strange calm, that she would burn her hands on the rafter when she tried to lift it.

She did try. He heard her grunt. He heard her try again. The rafter did not move.

"Pim," she said, very close to his ear. Her hand found the back of his neck. It was shaking. "Pim, stay with me. Stay awake. I'm going to get this off you."

"It's heavy," he whispered.

"Hush."

"It's on fire."

"Hush."

He heard her stand. He heard her drag something across the floor, a table, a bench, and then he heard her set her shoulder under the rafter and heave. The rafter shifted an inch. He gasped. Sera set her feet and heaved again, and the rafter shifted another inch, and a sound came out of her that was not a word, a sound like tearing cloth.

Then something else moved in the doorway.

Pim turned his head. Through the smoke he saw a shape. Tall. Cloaked in grey. A pale face under a pale helm, eyes like dished silver, and a short sword in its hand. Behind it, two more shapes, and behind them, the lane full of running shadows.

Sera saw them too. She did not stop heaving.

"Run," Pim said.

"No," she said.

"Sera."

"I said no." Her voice was thin and bright and absolutely certain. She set her feet again. The rafter lifted an inch. The pain in Pim's leg became a thing with a voice, and he bit down on his own wrist to keep from screaming.

The first Hollow soldier came through the doorway.

He came fast, the short sword already swinging in a low arc aimed at Sera's back. Pim tried to call out. The sword whistled.

The sound it made when it stopped was not the sound of steel on steel. It was a hum, low and sweet and wrong, the note a glass makes when you rub the rim with a wet finger.

The sword stopped because another sword had caught it.

Caelan stood in the doorway. His shirt was off. Across his ribs, on the left side, a bandage was wound tight, and through the bandage a dark stain had spread, and the skin around it was the color of old wax. He had been wounded. He was wounded still. But the sword in his hand was not the practice blade he carried at the academy. It was a longsword of pale steel, and where the firelight touched it, the steel did not shine. It burned. A thin line of cold flame ran along the edge from hilt to point, and where it passed through the smoke it left a trail that hung in the air for a heartbeat before it faded.

The Hollow soldier pulled back. Caelan did not let him go. He stepped forward, and the pale flame on his blade drew a slow arc through the smoke, and the sound it made was the hum again, deeper now, almost a voice. The Hollow soldier's short sword met it and the short sword rang like a cracked bell and the Hollow soldier staggered.

Sera had not moved. She was still holding the rafter. Her face was white.

"Caelan," she said.

"Take him out," Caelan said. His voice was very calm. "Take him out now."

The second Hollow soldier came through the door. Caelan met him without turning his body, the longsword flickering once, twice, and the pale flame left a trail in the air like a slow-drawn ribbon. The second soldier fell back. The third came in from the side, and Caelan stepped into him, and the flame on his blade licked upward along the short sword and the soldier dropped it with a cry and Caelan's pommel took him under the jaw and he went down.

The first soldier rose. Caelan turned.

Pim watched. He could not look away. The pale flame moved like something alive, and where it touched the air it left a line of light that hung for a moment and then dissolved into sparks. Caelan moved through the three of them the way water moves through a broken dam, slow and certain and without waste. He did not shout. He did not roar. The hum of the blade spoke for him.

Sera hauled the rafter up another inch. It was enough. Pim dragged himself backward, his leg screaming, and Sera got her shoulder under him and pulled him clear. He felt the weight lift off his chest and the air rush back into his lungs and the pain in his leg bloom into something enormous and red.

"Out," Sera said. "Out, out, out."

She half carried him through the doorway. Behind them the pale flame still moved, and the hum of the sword still hung in the smoke, and Caelan Durren, son of a disgraced northern lord, second-year student at the academy, half-healed from a wound he would not explain, stood between Sera and the fire and fought.

The heat came off the burning hall in a single long breath. Pim felt it on his face, on his good leg, on the hands Sera had hooked under his arms. His broken leg dragged a furrow in the ash as she hauled him backward, and he could not tell if the sounds he made were words or only noise.

"Stop wriggling," Sera said, and her voice was close to his ear and very tight. "You're making it worse."

Caelan had cleared the doorway. Pim did not see him do it. One moment the three soldiers were between them and the courtyard; the next, Caelan was beside them with the pale flame still running along his blade and the air behind him full of sparks, and there was a path.

"The postern," Caelan said. His voice was level, the way a floor is level. "Now."

Sera turned. Pim hung from her shoulder and tried to set his good foot down and the courtyard tilted. He saw the old chapel wall, cracked down the middle. He saw the moon coming up over the ridge, the colour of a bruise. He saw the Silver Order brothers forming up along the side of the burning hall, their long-hafted axes catching the light, and behind them, deeper in the smoke, he saw Master Dunmore.

The old cartographer was on his knees.

Pim thought at first it was the smoke. Master Dunmore was bent forward, his hands on the flagstones, his shoulders heaving. Then he saw the man standing over him.

The man was tall. He wore the long coat of a Hollow rider, black oilskin over black leather, and his boots were caked with the same grey ash that Pim had tasted on his tongue. His face was half hidden by a mask of bone, jawless and eyeless on one side, a white grin running from his cheekbone to his chin. The other half of his face was a man in his forties, dark-haired, with a long scar that pulled the corner of his mouth into something that was not quite a smile. He held no sword. He held a long curved knife, and the edge of it was wet.

Marrow, Pim thought. He did not know where the name came from. It came anyway.

"I know what you carry," Marrow said. His voice was quiet. Pim heard it the way you hear something through a wall. "I have known since the snowmelt. You thought the road was closed, old man. The road is never closed."

Master Dunmore lifted his head. Blood ran from somewhere under his coat and pooled on the flagstones and the moonlight found it and turned it black. He did not speak at once. He looked past Marrow, past the smoke, across the courtyard, and for one long breath his eyes found Sera's.

Pim saw what he saw in those eyes. He saw the thing that had been sitting in Master Dunmore's face since the night he had first taken Pim's chin in his scarred hand and looked at him and said, "You see too much, lad. We will have to teach you how to stop." Master Dunmore looked at Sera and the thing in his face was, at last, allowed to be afraid.

"No," Pim said.

He did not know who he was speaking to. Sera. Caelan. Master Dunmore. The smoke. He wrenched against Sera's shoulder and Sera held him and said his name, sharp, once, and did not let go.

Marrow drew the curved knife along the inside of his own forearm, testing the edge. The sound it made was small and wet. Master Dunmore's hand went to his own belt, beneath his coat, where a leather satchel hung against his ribs. The map. Pim had only ever seen it from a distance. Master Dunmore had once taken it out, in the long room at the academy, and the parchment had caught the lamp light and seemed to breathe, and he had looked at Pim across it and said, "Some things are heavier than they look."

"Don't," Marrow said. The word was almost gentle. "Don't make me ask twice."

Master Dunmore did not look at him again. He looked at Sera, and his mouth moved, and Sera made a sound that Pim had never heard from her, a sound with no air in it.

Caelan broke from them.

He went forward across the courtyard in three long strides, the pale flame leaping up the blade as he lifted it, and Marrow turned without haste and caught the stroke on the flat of the curved knife and turned it and stepped inside Caelan's reach and put his shoulder into Caelan's chest and Caelan went backward onto the flagstones. The flame went out. It did not gutter. It went out as if a hand had been laid over it.

"Now," Marrow said, to no one in particular.

He stepped back to Master Dunmore. He did not hurry. The bone half-mask caught the moonlight and Pim thought of things he had been told not to think of, things that lived under hills, things that wore the faces of dead men.

Master Dunmore's hand came out from under his coat. It was not the map. It was a key, small, iron, old. He held it out across the blood on the flagstones, across the three paces of courtyard, across the smoke, toward Sera.

Sera let go of Pim.

Pim hit the ground. His broken leg folded under him and the pain rose up through him like a wave and he bit through his lip and tasted copper. He did not cry out. He watched Sera run, her boots slipping in the ash, her hair coming loose, and Caelan rising behind Marrow with the sword in both hands and the pale flame not coming back.

She reached Master Dunmore. She went down on her knees in the blood. Marrow let her.

"Take it," Master Dunmore said. His voice was the sound a hinge makes when it is rusted through. "Sera. Take it."

She took the key. Her fingers closed around it and the iron was warm from his hand and she looked at it and then at his face and her mouth would not shape any of the words that were pressing behind her teeth.

"The map," he said. He was speaking into her ear now, or trying to. His breath came in short shallow pulls. "Sera. The map is not a map. It is the road home for those who have no home. Do you hear me, girl. Do you hear me."

"I hear you," she said.

"Good." The word caught in his throat. "Good girl."

Marrow stepped past Sera and put the curved knife into Master Dunmore's back. The sound it made was small. Pim heard it the way you hear a branch snap in the woods when you are alone. Master Dunmore's shoulders drew up once and then settled, and his head came to rest against Sera's shoulder, and his hand, the one that had held the key, fell open on the flagstones.

Sera did not move for a long time. The smoke moved around her. The moonlight moved around her. Marrow moved away from her, back toward the road, and he did not look at her again because he did not need to.

Pim crawled.

He did not decide to crawl. His body decided for him, his arms pulling him forward across the ash and the flagstones, his broken leg trailing, the pain in it so large now that it had become a kind of weather, something he lived inside. He reached Sera. He put his hand on her wrist. He felt the iron of the key through her glove.

"Sera," he said.

She looked at him. Her eyes were dry. They were the dryest things he had ever seen.

"Get up," he said. "Sera. Get up. Please."

Caelan reached them. He was bleeding from somewhere above his hairline and the blood had run down into one eye and he did not wipe it away. He took Sera under the arm and Pim under the other arm and lifted them both, and Sera made a sound that was almost a word, and the key was in her hand and the map was gone.

It was not gone. Pim understood this later. It was in the satchel under Master Dunmore's coat, and Marrow had taken the satchel when he stepped away, and Pim saw it on Marrow's belt as Marrow turned toward the road. The key was for the map. The key was for the road. Sera had the key, and Marrow had the road, and between them there was nothing but a dead man on a courtyard and the smoke going up into the moon.

"Run," Caelan said.

They ran.

Pim did not run. He was carried. Caelan took him across the shoulders like a sack of meal, his arm across the back of Caelan's neck, his broken leg dangling, and Caelan set his stride to the slope of the ground and did not slow and did not speak. Sera ran beside them. She ran the way she did everything, without flourish, her arms close to her sides, her eyes on the ground ahead of her, choosing her steps as if she were still in the courtyard, as if the world had not just changed.

Behind them the Silver Order brothers were dying. Pim heard it. He heard the axes and the shouts and the longer sounds that came after the shouts. He heard a horse scream. He heard a man say a word that was not a word but only a noise of pain. He heard Marrow's voice, once, calm, giving an order.

The postern gate was open. Three brothers held it. They were old men, brothers of the order, with their long coats and their axes, and when they saw Caelan coming with Pim over his shoulder and Sera at his side, they stepped back and let them through and did not ask where they were going because they already knew.

The forest took them in.

It was a dark forest, an old forest, the kind of forest that has forgotten what the sun looks like. The pines grew close together and their branches laced overhead and the moonlight came through in thin pale strips that did not look like moonlight but like something else, something laid down by a careful hand. The ground was soft with needles. Caelan set Pim down against a trunk and Sera went to her knees beside him and put her hands on his leg and he heard her make a small sound through her teeth.

"Don't," he said. "Don't touch it."

"I have to."

"You don't."

"Pim." Her voice was the voice she used when she meant him to listen. "I have to."

He let her.

He looked up through the branches and saw, far back, beyond the trees, the sky above the academy lit with the colour of the fire. It was the colour of an orange left too long in a bowl. It pulsed. He watched it pulse and he thought of Master Dunmore's hand falling open on the flagstones and the key disappearing into Sera's fist.

Then he heard the horses.

They came from the east. The sound of them came through the pines the way wind comes through pines, in waves, in long shudders of sound. He could not see them. He could not see anything. He could hear the hooves on the soft ground, and he could hear, above the hooves, the howling.

It was not a howl. It was not a cry. It was the sound the Hollow riders made when they ran in the dark, a long rising note that hung in the throat of the forest and did not fall. Sera's hands stopped on his leg. Caelan, who had been standing with his head bowed and the sword hanging from his hand, lifted his head.

"How many," Sera said.

"Enough," Caelan said.

Pim put his hand on the bark of the pine at his back and felt it, the rough ridges of it, the cold of it, the small lives moving under the bark that he could not hear but knew were there. He looked at Sera. She had the key in her glove, against her palm. He could see the shape of it through the leather.

He thought of the ravens. He thought of the way his blood moved when he called them. He thought of the long road from the city to the academy, and the things he had seen on that road, and the things he had been told he would see.

The howling came closer.

"They're in the trees," Pim said. He did not know how he knew. He knew. "Sera. They're already in the trees."

Caelan put his shoulder under Pim's arm. Sera stood up. The key was in her hand. The fire behind them was beginning to die, and the howling in front of them was beginning to rise, and between the two of them Pim Voss, orphaned and small and twelve years old and carried now by a man whose father had served the enemy and a woman whose blood was a crown, set his good foot against the soft ground of the dark forest and took the first step of the long road home.

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